Reviews for I Live In
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
WOW this is so old it must be a classic. WOW did I just say that, you arnt that old...*drops chainsaw and starts running* This is good.
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Very interesting - I liked the comparisons. So wait a minute . . . you're nineteen now, you wrote this in seventh grade, five years ago . . . so you were either thirteen or fourteen, right? Cool. ;)

Tenika Dargan
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
Pretty damn good for a 7th grade poem :) I started writing then, but I had a wider vocabulary by the time I was 13, so I write way better now anyway - heh so back to your poem.. simply beautiful. I like how you describe the garden "And everything in my garden dies,

Only to come back with the hopeful spring." *SNIFF* like those last 2 lines. Thank you for all the wonderful reviews you've given me, it's very much appeciated. Thanks so much!

simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
me liked it.. again great imagery & very cool.. its funny cuz I just read your other poem taht had gardeny stuf... even tho its a different poem its still gardeny... you must like gardens! lol...great poem!