|Reviews for Rude Awakening|
| Donna Fates chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
thats so professional, it's like right out of... lets just say it's original. i love it. you could total sell a collection of these in a book and i would buy it, buy all of them, if they weren't over $30 thats how good you are, yeah.
| DirtySecrets chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
My my. Impressive. I'm a fan of shakespeare, myself, you know, and the reference to Queen Mab (though she isnt entirely a Shakespearian creation) was quite genius. Your flow is fine, so don't worry about it. Iambic pentameter isnt always neccessary in sonnets - I've written quite a few myself (though they remain unpublished). Once again, it's very impressive and a worthy read.
| Wren Craven chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I love sonnets..ever since a boy I liked wrote me one, I've fallen in love... this one is very, very, very well written...(it's hard to write in iambic pentameter, eh?) please read and review my work, too...