Reviews for Tastes
CrzyChica16 chapter 1 . 1/2/2004
i really like this, it's deep... intense... well written! nice job
Kaishiou chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
Well, at least it is better than mine. And hey, I don't mean it in a negative way. Keep writing. 0
K.G. Hollingsworth chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
M, there is no real flow to this, you might work on smoothing it out, and clean up the typo, "he razor" third line form the bottom. The emotion is there, and is good, keep writing. I have a poem somewhere with titled with your pen-name... I might have to track it down and repost it now. _
ButterfliKysses chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
Is this really your first poem? Its very well written and a very good poem! I like how the meaning is intangled with the words (and if it isn't, I might have just thought so because I'm really tired and should be asleep) Keep up the good work, and I hope you write more! I write poetry a lot, read them if you'd like and if you have the time, please!