Reviews for Alone in the Sunlight
Sycho Skitz chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
"Have you have gone into a garden of your own,

And left me in my own to be lonely,

Forevermore?"

reminds me of unrequited love...it's so sweet, yet sad. beautiful imagery. i love your work.

-skitz
Romantic Squirrel chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
This one is on your website(yes I did check it out) I like this one, very sweet.
Tenika D chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Hey, I like this - I like the questioning tone to it. For some reason the subject in this piece didn't sound upset or disappointed to me, just inquisitive . . . kinda weird, ne? O.o Might I quote a line that made me smile?

"The green of the grass and leaves,

Only serve to remind me of your eyes,

(No matter how blue they were.)

Very sweet.

Tenika Dargan
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/12/2003
again I love your format it rocks a lot & very great imagery... very sad poem tho... sweet too.. kinda bittersweet... great poem.. tahnks for the reviews!
Miamouse chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
That's lovely, a perfect opening to something, like your website.

Mia
Mime chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
*mutters something about updating her own flimsy excuse of a website*

*sees Liquid staring at her*

Wha-? Oh! I'm in a review, aren't I?

*sheepish grin*

Okay, sorry about that, this is a great poem, and I see why you're using for your website! Keep writing!
Jess Angel chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
Aww, that ending was so...sad. Many beautiful lines in this one.

"Sunshine and light,

They can not replace your arms."

"The green of the grass and leaves,

Only serve to remind me of your eyes, (No matter how blue they were." - something almost haunting about that part

I enjoyed this. Keep writing!

Jess 0:o)