|Reviews for I'm Not Here|
| AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
I really like how you say "I'm not" at the beginning of each stanza, denying it. I especially like the ending, about the mantra, and ending it w/ "swet denial keeps me happy."
But I really, really like the other one, "falling sky"? And the one I reviewed before that.
| OryssaV chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
I don't know if you noticed, but you can't make a sense out of chaos. That is its nature. And if you think you can try... that really is denial.
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
Great flow and form. Another fine piece.
~Heart of the Sword
| Lynne E. Porter chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
I like it, in some strange way, it speaks to me. I think it is about everyone, we all have those feelings deep inside somewhere. We all try to think we are invinsible. Thanks, that touched me... For some, strange reason...
| camena animi chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
i love this actually i cant really think of any suggestions but i love the line: "I am complete, I am immune." everything was very well phrased and clear good job