Reviews for I'm Not Here
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
I really like how you say "I'm not" at the beginning of each stanza, denying it. I especially like the ending, about the mantra, and ending it w/ "swet denial keeps me happy."
But I really, really like the other one, "falling sky"? And the one I reviewed before that.
OryssaV chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
I don't know if you noticed, but you can't make a sense out of chaos. That is its nature. And if you think you can try... that really is denial.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 10/26/2003
Great flow and form. Another fine piece.

~Heart of the Sword
Lynne E. Porter chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
I like it, in some strange way, it speaks to me. I think it is about everyone, we all have those feelings deep inside somewhere. We all try to think we are invinsible. Thanks, that touched me... For some, strange reason...

Keep Writing-

camena animi chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
i love this actually i cant really think of any suggestions but i love the line: "I am complete, I am immune." everything was very well phrased and clear good job