|Reviews for Betrayal|
| AVIGON chapter 1 . 12/28/2003
I think this is the first time I see you use short lines like this... I don't know what to think of it. "3" just is awesome, but "1" and "2" aren't so bad either. ;o)
| CrimsonCat chapter 1 . 10/11/2003
the second part made my heart flinch. Maybe because it's too true to accept easily.
I like that you don't deny the truth.