Reviews for Hot Fudge Sundae
Lily Lady of Legend chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Um. You spelled 'savured' wrong. And you forgot to end the quotes on the last line. I'm sorry, but this is painful. It's an admirable attempt.
Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
You mispelled "Savoured" and "you're" and you didn't close your quotations at the end. But other than that it's a great poem. I like it. )
Choleric Mist chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
Cute :P
krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
true, i love hot fudge sundaes. they are truly best when ate with friends _
later
Lil Lalita chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Me likes! Sweet and really kind of touching. Nice one!
~Lil Lalita
Shiroi Hana chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
lol. Cute. Sounds like something you would sing/chant/whatever while playing jumprope or something. I still remember some of them...
"Fudge/ Fudge/ Call the judge/ _'s having a baby/ Daddy's going crazy..."
Oh! Oh! And:
"Ice cream soda/ Cherry on top/ Who's your boyfriend?/ I forgot/ Is it 'A'? 'B'?..."
Ahem. Anyway...good poem. WAY cuter than any of mine could ever be...*mumbles* Lucky.
cheer wierdo chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
It was a good poem good job.