|Reviews for Hot Fudge Sundae|
| Lily Lady of Legend chapter 1 . 9/10/2006
Um. You spelled 'savured' wrong. And you forgot to end the quotes on the last line. I'm sorry, but this is painful. It's an admirable attempt.
| Jesse the Storyteller chapter 1 . 1/15/2005
You mispelled "Savoured" and "you're" and you didn't close your quotations at the end. But other than that it's a great poem. I like it. )
| Choleric Mist chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
| krystalpendragon chapter 1 . 1/30/2004
true, i love hot fudge sundaes. they are truly best when ate with friends _
| Lil Lalita chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
Me likes! Sweet and really kind of touching. Nice one!
| Shiroi Hana chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
lol. Cute. Sounds like something you would sing/chant/whatever while playing jumprope or something. I still remember some of them...
"Fudge/ Fudge/ Call the judge/ _'s having a baby/ Daddy's going crazy..."
Oh! Oh! And:
"Ice cream soda/ Cherry on top/ Who's your boyfriend?/ I forgot/ Is it 'A'? 'B'?..."
Ahem. Anyway...good poem. WAY cuter than any of mine could ever be...*mumbles* Lucky.
| cheer wierdo chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
It was a good poem good job.