haha, I think you're right about camp names. Personally, I think Camp Lone Tree sounds better than Camp Blue Lake, which is one of the camps I've been to! (And the lake wasn't even blue. It was so dirty, we couldn't even swim in it!) Anyways, this is pretty good so far. Obviously you haven't updated it in a while.

This is very intersting. I loved the tree part. It made me chuckle numerous times.
Yes, trees. Lovely Trees.
It is off to a good start and I hope you continue.
~Laura

AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME! Yes, its me! Yay, me! But- am I based on the girl who loves Lukey or what? I'm a little confused there- but I'm confused alot! More!

YAY! LENA! ITS ME BUBBLEGUM! GO READ MY EXTREAMLY DUMB POEM! ITS DUMB! YOUD LIKE IT PWEASE?

Hi! First off, thanks for reviewing my story! If you want, check out my other one. Just to let you know, this is a good start. It's neat because a lot of teens hang around here (me amung them) and they can all probably relate to some sort of bus ride similar to this one. Your writing style is good, and you seem to have good spelling and gramar. (though I, myself don't do so well in that department, so you might want a second opinion) Keep up the good work!

yay rocky! you'll be the only person that reviews mine and i'm the first person to review yours, good job!