Reviews for The Gypsy Girl
ArmandsArdour chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
J'aime! I love this! I love gypsies! I love dancing! I want to dance right now. with a gypsy!
Gigi the Dancer chapter 1 . 6/1/2006
cute
Sahara Hayden chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
Very nice...I liked the way you ended most of the stanzas with "come, come and dance" but because you didn't do that throughout the whole poem, it ruined the rhythm a little bit. But, great use of imagery..a lot of different images flashed through my mind. Nice job!~Sahara~
The Sneak chapter 1 . 12/16/2004
Wicked. Love it much. Can't say anything but AWESOME job and I just wish I had your talent.
SomeCowgirl chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
Really draws you in. Nice work!
Dreaming Slumber chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
I like it. Very original and I like the subject and the discrimtion!
Paperclippe chapter 1 . 3/23/2004
I like this! Especially the ending, I didn't expect it! A little bit of sadness in there that made the happy end all the sweeter.
Liz the uber freak chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
it's so vivid! i can imagine it in my mind!
Anita Darling chapter 1 . 12/18/2001
i loved this poem so much that i wished that this was a story...(hint, hint, hint!) it reminds me of a girl dancing in the desert at night. great imagery, you've got talent. still wish it was a story-come on, why not? Make one based on this poem-I'll be on the watch for it.
lexxie r chapter 1 . 12/16/2000
Great poem. Nice imagery and rhythm. Really appeals to the senses.