umm... tis like I said before, and I know you emailed me and everything, but I'm still worried about this getting formulaeic.

that said, I like your writing style and hurry up and do a new chapter, it's been ages since I read a band fic.

interesting chapter! update son!

Jen

I hope this doesn't go where I think it's going.

Not bad though

*giggles*

I LOVE BENJI!

He's so incredibly hot!

*huggles Benji*

by the way... great chapter!

Jen

hehe yeah, the yelling in a whisper sounds kind of crazy. It's hard to explain. I meant whispering really harshly, IDK, that sounded dumb too...yeah there's going to be ALOT more haha keep reading, thnx for reviews guys :)!

O_o, keep writing, I'd like to know what happens next

Hey, cool start. I will definatly watch for more to come. One problem, "I yelled in a whisper" Huh? How do you do that? Can you teach me? Anyways, that's the only thing I found, so good job and I want more! ;)

Keep writing

~ionlyliveindreams

this is a cool story... u need to continue! i really want to know what happens next!

Jen

Hey, I really like this story. Is there anymore that will be written? Kylie :)