Reviews for Young girl
child-like dreamer chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
this hits home to me, because i know a girl who had the same problem, got pregnant in high school, but fortunetley, the father stayed, and married her, but she didnt get to finish school. reminds me of "what would you do" by high city- very good song, and very good poem. the ryhming at the beggining and then not laster on is a little odd, but it works. i like the repitition of "what would she do" shows the strong message of hopelessness that the girl is probably feeling,. veyr well done. :)
KawaiiCookie chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
You really got the feeling across. I like how you made it rhyme in places too. Bravo!