|Reviews for Like A Rose|
| DeViLDaughTeR chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
I thought it was great. I really liked it. But.. i think you should change it..because..I do not believe roses turn black..as they wilt..But then again.. If thats how you want to make the poem go ahead..
| suckerplucker chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
a) this should be in love, i think
b) you quite obviously have no knowledge as to the meaning/ usage of the word anew. Anew means again, or over again, here you need to use new, not anew.
c) roses don't (i believe) blacken as they wilt.
d) your last line is just kind of familiar for the haughtiness of the rest of the piece.
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/14/2003
very cool & true me likes a lot!
| Shy Cutie89 chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
wow! that was really good. I liked how you referedit to a rose. Roses can be the prettiest and ugliest things to. I hope you have better luck. Keep writing!
| Delphian Wyrd chapter 1 . 10/13/2003
that is sad, is it true?