Reviews for Bobby's and Dick's |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really interesting story. Not much happens and there isn't any character development, but it's a great little insight into the character's world. And you seem to have a really interesting character. I love that she starts and stops her inner monologue with smoking. It's an interesting way to show her priorities in live and the things that she thinks about. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hot damn, this is good! I really like it. It remind me of Fight Club a little bit; the style and tone, I mean. Just less fractured and easier to digest. Nice job! Please continue! |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was really good writing, i loved your descriptions of where the patch was. it was really good.~*~confwuzzled~*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very nice. I love these kind of despondent, screw-the-world stories. |