Reviews for If You Were Just Close
Raven Dauphin chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
Thanks Angel for reading my poem, and adding me to your fave authors list. Just wanna say that I'm honored and appreciate it so much...

I like this poem, it uses rhyming effect pretty well. Of course there is room for improvement, but I know you'll do good. Thanks a lot again...

Keep writing,

Breanna (Raven)
Aragon chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
good job i liked it.

the ryming was good.