Reviews for This is why
Whitesiren chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
an interesting perspective! i can almost envision the situation projected.

i enjoyed reading this... think i'll read mroe of your works...
Nerf chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
i reli like this, i like the way it portrays uncertainty. Very well done!

XXNerfxx
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
I got a FP mail telling me you had written this. I read the summary and said: "I gotto read this one."

Sorry, rambling.

This was great, it actually makes sense and it's cool to see both sides of the argument. I loved how she couldn't make up her mind, it kept changing, you portrayed it so well. Great work!
aulliana chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
I have a friend who makes me kinda feel that way...

Anywho, good writing, I really liked it.

Sm!lEz,

aulliana
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Kinda confusing, but then the poem is about confusing emotions so it fits well... i love the STOP... tahts funky... great poem!