Reviews for Searching
You'll Never Walk Alone chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
Well, you're right about the straight-forward thing. At first I didn't get what you meant by, 'you took my candles and matches', but then I had to smack myself in the head because of course you meant light. The repetition in the sixth stanza is really swell, because it sort of enhances the feeling that you're a little confused and don't know what you're searching for.
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
I like it. It's not bad but it could be better. You talked about candles and matches before you talked about the pitch black tunnel so when I came acros s"candels and matches" I had no clue what u were talking about. And I think you should've elaborated a bit more on the pitch black tunnel and mentioned it more than once because it's important that it's an enless tunnel that you're wandering through, looking for light. I think you should've made that a bit more clear. But overall it's pretty good!
forever fallen chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Wow...that's all I can say. It's not your usual atyle trur, but I'd say it's a good one. :) I like those "maybe..."s.