u had me drawn in. I had forgetten i was just reading until the last line hit me. I personally thought this was fantastci except I do not know what atropurpureas are...plz let me know...or dont, I dont mind sitting in my own curiosity. Cant wait to read more of ur work. May grace b with u.

woa thats really good. I like the meaning of it- even though its confusing, it works well because you have to search a bit! Some of the lines in here are just amaizng, infact the whole poems amazing!

love the last line to this, good flow and rhyming throughout, strong imagery, like it, well done

Very nice. It flowed perfectly, I could hear it all in my mind beautifully.

wow really good. i love the words. sort of like...i dont know...gothic. i was looking for your poem cutting. i reviewed it once but wanted to read it again.

Great stuff man
"Sing the soul a forceful dread
Drown it amongst the darkest red
Fear to breathe - the beauty's dead
And this is your last dawning"
is a real good, strong stanza in my mind. However, the last line
'Atropurpureas lavish the seaside'
I'm not sure what 'atropurpureas' means, but it seems like you're trying a *bit* too hard. Great work, 9/10

wow... you're so good at this! i'd like to read
more!

Wow, it's really well written...I don't know what else to say about it, it's realy good. Thanks for the review of my story, The Crash )

This is so lovely and beautiful! Ahh! :)

I love this! Beautifully written, incredible imagery. The whole thing flows very nicely, and gives a lasting impression.

I'd like to hear it as a song. Or see it played out with images. The images it brought to my mind were awesome. It inspires me to go create stuff on photoshop.

o...I like

tell me more of your tales young one.

reviewed, and critiqued

it's not bad, but sometimes I miss the flow, that's just me though. Have a good day.

Wow! I wish I could write that well! It was so great! I think you're one of the Best-est writers ever! -lol- Yeah, but I do. _

that was pretty. I like all the words and personifications. This was really nice.

That's so beautiful, I think it's one of my favorites by you. Really nice imagery and language. I'm gonna have to use it somewhere :D