Reviews for Do You Remember?
absolute0 chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Passing thoughts indeed. ) This time, you're writing about everyday stuff. I like how you portrayed the everyday feeling of the poem, especially with the lines "The ghosts/ don their yellow hats/ and pneumatic drills/ to haunt... " Quite fitting, as we see them almost everyday and yet we barely take notice of them and their work.
MandELLA chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
and i still love your poems...

MandELLA
Toireasa chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Oh boy, this one makes me go all deep, which is not supposed to happen beyond English and homework for said class. I like it, it really is the type that gets me thinking. It reminds me, in a very subtle, unusual way, of Oscar Wilde's "The Importance of Being Earnest." Erp, anyways, great job, and I, as always, look forward to more.

~Toireasa