Reviews for Bubbles are fun
Papillons Noirs chapter 1 . 11/24/2003
OK.. there were quite a few new words in there... but this is good in a cute sort of way. I love it, especially knowing that people can think like this past age 7
absolute0 chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Nice idea. Nice flow. I guess this poem is just meant for fun but when you think about it, especially with how you posed the questions at the start of the poem, you speak of contemplation while playing with soap bubbles (or eating cherry). Then again, maybe I'm thinking deep here. )

Hey wait, notice how the fun idea ties up with the idea of promiscuity and ecstatic heaven. I guess this one's deeper than you think. Heheh.
MandELLA chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
did you really think of this when washing your hands?

Imagine what you think when you shower.

WAIT! that was not supposed to be taken in a gross way...

i just meant that washing hands is small...blah.

there's no way to get out of this.

i was in awe at this poem

Toireasa chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Thing is, I love poetry like this. There is not nearly enough sweet poems out there, and it gets really depressing very fast when you read said poems. So I love this sort of thing. Nice, I love your freestyle.