|Reviews for This Is My Life|
| anon chapter 1 . 2/15/2005
um...i don't know what to say...that was...touching...what ever happens don't ever stop writing
| Summerdazed chapter 1 . 1/6/2004
so emotional, powerful, depressing...all the stuff from the dark side. Yet it's strangely beautiful too. Hope this isn't what you really feel.
| Nienna Calafalas chapter 1 . 10/28/2003
This is your life
And as yet the life of others
You are not alone
As others cower behind there mothers
You stand proud
Although they can't see
Their cruel words and jabs
Try if you can't
Then place your heart
In a simple chant
The God i speak of
He dosn't exist
But believe in yourself
And you will be in eternal bliss
| BecomingMyself chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
...Shirley Bassy at the best!
It must be hard to live a life like this, and to live it with so much pain...
Maybe try to change?
Get on with your life, and maybe you will find some happiness, stick around to find out!
Heartfelt emotions, well written, even just a piece out of your diary.
| Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 10/20/2003
The repetitive phrase worked really well here. I had thought of something different from the title and description but this was still really amazing. It flows so well with such a perfect narritive. Really great stuff!