Reviews for The Breakup |
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![]() ![]() ![]() First off I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poems. Second, I LOVED this poem, especially the last two lines. Kick ass job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent stuff. Short and original and straight-forward. I like your last two lines best. It's a nice way to close and it fits so well. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() damn that's tite geez...nice wow...that's short simplistic biting shows your pain good job keep up the good work *gives you the thumbs up* |