Reviews for The Breakup
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
First off I wanted to thank you for reviewing my poems. Second, I LOVED this poem, especially the last two lines. Kick ass job!
KawaiiCookie chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Excellent stuff. Short and original and straight-forward.

I like your last two lines best. It's a nice way to close and it fits so well. .
Somebody's Anyone chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
damn

that's tite

geez...nice

wow...that's short

simplistic

biting

shows your pain

good job

keep up the good work

*gives you the thumbs up*