Reviews for Dead Night
Toph Gonzalez chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
I can truly feel its stagnancy(or is it stagnation) and subtleness...
Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 9/22/2004
What is it about Haiku? I just can't seem to get enough. There are so manny different ways to interepret them. Love the abruptness by the way.
pointythings chapter 1 . 9/2/2004
I like it. very deep...in a weird sort of way. Cool.
Crimson Gold chapter 1 . 7/20/2004
Very good poem. It's really beautiful, the words are intricate and flowing. Sad, but I think that alot of the best poems are sad
erin chapter 1 . 7/14/2004
um okay
Widower chapter 1 . 7/11/2004
Very dark. I like it.
FireNeiko chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
Tis' the wind of life
whistaling through the hollow grounds
... Ignore that... please...
I like your Hiku's (don't really know how to spell that... ;;)
Lil Sis chapter 1 . 6/5/2004
Cool! I think...
I am confuzeled
*head spinning*
Okay! I am over it!
That was Awesome! I think...
The L1zard Queen chapter 1 . 5/26/2004
I like et! Thanks for the positive review! :D It made me feel good _ Yippee
vegan31690 chapter 1 . 5/25/2004
oo, i like it!very deep, kinda scary, but iotz kewl, makes me think of well, night time, and of bein sleepy :)
Enstin chapter 1 . 4/30/2004
hey i like this haiku! really! even the dead part! hehe...ok well i liked the first two lines better though. I mean, the last line kinda ruins the mood-ish...it was special (at lack of a better word) and then it was blunt: "everything is dead." like the end...ok i'm rambling...see you in french
katmonkey chapter 1 . 4/21/2004
Short and to the point. Nice imagery aswell.
*lime-girl*
Anat Qetesh chapter 1 . 4/4/2004
wow, very poiniant, deep and simple. i could never do that! keep it up, you will go far.
Iseult-Aralin chapter 1 . 3/31/2004
oo, very ominous and well written; I like it! (Thanks for your review of my stuff too!)
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
Interesting...I liked it. Good job!
Lsay312
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