Reviews for When You Own the Universe
Lightning31415 chapter 4 . 8/2/2017
Oh good God...
Half of this chapter is part of your Author's Notes and responses to your fans. That is excessive.
Really excessive.

Please make it stop...
Hello it's me chapter 25 . 7/15/2017
I enjoyed this story. I was tired but I stayed up to read this.
Hello it's me chapter 1 . 7/15/2017
Fantastic start. I love it!
MayWillow chapter 26 . 2/27/2017
Ok so I've my mid terms coming up but I couldn't study at all because I fell so much in love with the male lead that I couldn't stop myself. I mean Jonah...JONAH! He's amazing and I loved loved loved him! And I felt so bad for him and just wished so much that I could comfort him. Sorry to say but I around chapter 15 to 20 I hated the Pierce twins on how self-absorbed they were. Remembrance was annoyingly demanding and even Remington disappointed me so much. Loved Chris xoxox
Overall, the plot was great. Nice development of characters and deliverance of thoughts and words but...there were points where the story was a bit weird and random and abrupt. And we are still left wondering about what happened to Jonah's father and if his mother ever tried to contact him again.
Anyway...I cried a lot for Jonah. He was beautiful.
Good story.
harshakuniyil chapter 26 . 2/24/2017
The most Amazing story on fictionpress
Bahati chapter 11 . 12/18/2016
He just lost the bet
Amordeyn chapter 19 . 7/12/2016
I really tried to stop myself from crying over the past couple of chapters, but this one made me burst into tears. But it was awesome. The story, I mean.
dheepi chapter 26 . 4/26/2016
I just luvd readng dis story.. Njyd a lot... (:
YungMoolah chapter 26 . 1/29/2016
Brilliant story. Absolutely loved all of it :D Its a shame that the epilogue wasn't longer ahahah
Guest chapter 26 . 11/29/2015
BonnesParoles chapter 26 . 9/8/2015
Hi! I NEVER review stories, but I felt the need to review this. Okay, that's a lie. I've probably read 1000 stories on this and have only reviewed 3. BUT I loved this story and to be honest, I almost gave up on it. I don't know. Somewhere around Chapter 8, I wasn't feeling it, but I'm glad I stuck with it. ALSO, it took me until the last chapter to realize that Jonah's favorite movie is Sleepless in Seattle and that Tom Hanks's character's son is named Jonah! When I realized that, my mind was blown. Anyway, great story!
Emoddess chapter 1 . 4/16/2015
I really, really love this story! In fact, this has got to definitely be one of my favourite stories on FictionPress. I was a bit bored today so I decided to go through my favourite stories' list and chose When You Own The Universe because I missed reading it again. It brought back the feelings that I felt when I first read this and I felt a bit nostalgic about it. It mesmerized me, really 3
yo chapter 2 . 4/12/2015
Don't know whether u ll be reading this but wat is the auction about?how...why...wat?... clueless
Guest chapter 26 . 2/28/2015
Wow, I just finished reading this amazing story. I love it so much, especially Remington's protectiveness. I wish I had such an all-star sibling like him. I hope to see this story in publication soon. The way you capture their emotions is realistic, though the dialogue gets a little monotonous and confusing. I'm sorry if I offended you. The characters are memorable and stand out. They made me cry, especially Jonah.
Thank you for such a great story. I hope that you can keep writing.
Good day.
gaelle chapter 24 . 12/27/2014
Girl u are so good in what u are doing.i loveeeeeee ur stories soooo is so funny sometimes.
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