|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| blusoul-420 chapter 8 . 5/8/2012
hi! wow, I really liked this chapter. I know you're already done writing they story, but I'm sure you wouldn't mind hearing praise for it even now :) I'm so interested to find out who this secret admirer is! I was wondering whether it was any of the other characters that have already been introduced, but I can't remember any other female character other than Karen, the ice-cream girl and it''s obviously not Remembrance, so I guess I'll have to wait and see
| The Quotidian Life chapter 26 . 4/28/2012
Awesome story. Love it
| Half-Blood chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Great so far! I also wrote a story that's great. you should read it.
| talitagouveia chapter 26 . 4/7/2012
I feel like I say this everytime, but with the stories I really like, I keep reading until the end, and won't stop for nothing... And your story was one of those. I loved the name of the characters... I mean, I can't put these names on my kids, 'cause I live in Brazil and people would only mock them, but really... I guess I'm rambling now, but the names made me want to know the characters, 'cause they have so powerful names, they must be powerful too, right? And they are. I fell in love with Remmy... Can you ship him for me, please?
So, I loved the story... And the plot. And I almost cried with them. Thanks!
| TemptedByLaNuit chapter 18 . 4/5/2012
Wow. This chapter absolutely broke my heart. Very well written, hon.
| streetracer-2012 chapter 26 . 4/1/2012
awesome story loved the ending.
it actually made me cry!
love and all the mushy stuff,
| A. Nonymous chapter 12 . 2/19/2012
Alicia wrote the letter? I did not see that one coming!
Dear, really. But hey, I found this story just today, and I love it. I can only imagine what you must think, this story was finished years ago after all; it must be nice to see people continue to read it.
- just a little miss
| Dandy352 chapter 26 . 1/18/2012
Hi. I just finished reading this nonstop yesterday night from afternoon. I have to say, I liked it and think it's well done. Good job! It made me intrigued about Jonah's past all the way, and it stings when he said "You weren't my best friend's sister. He was my best friend's brother." It made me say, "True" when they spoke about her demanding him to say the right words when they were supposed to make up. It made me feel longing when they weren't talking and she was staring at him from afar in their lunch table. I can make a story review like how I do for a book review on this work and needless to say, if I do then it'll be a promotion for your work. I really liked it. I hope you can update me if you've written other stories as well. This is going on my favorites. :)
Again, great job and God bless!
PS: Would please be a doll and try reading "Celebrity Love?" I do want to know what you have to say. Thank you and God bless again!
| InkedGirl chapter 26 . 1/17/2012
That was one amazing story! It took me till 2 in the morning to finish it but I just couldn't stop!
| tiltedHead chapter 6 . 1/7/2012
OMG, how cn Jonah cry soo much?
| tiltedHead chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Wow, you have the talent to write different characters' point of view without making the story boring.
| tiltedHead chapter 2 . 1/7/2012
Haha, Mem's violence tendencies are so endearing.
| tiltedHead chapter 1 . 1/7/2012
Ho,nice 1st chapter..
| RNE chapter 26 . 12/4/2011
I read this story years ago and I loved it then. Over the years I'd forgotten how much I loved it until I came across it quite accidentally today. I completely fell in love with it again. Your characters have so much depth to them. There are a ton of stories out there about two people who hated each other falling in love. Loads about a guy that a girl thinks is an arrogant jerk turning out to be actually a nice guy with a crush on her. But your story had much more to it than that. The feeling seemed more real and believable. I also liked how you didn't concentrate on the two main characters and provide so little detail about the rest. So many stories I've read have a secondary romance as well but very few of them really talk much about it. I loved how the bits in Remington's point of view helped tell another story as well as that of Jonah and Rememberance. I've rarely ever read a story on fanfiction a second time once I realized I'd read it before and remembered what it was about, purely because of the huge choice of new stories I could read. But your story completely captured my interest again, so much so that I spent a good proportion of today re-reading despite the amount of work I had. In fact once I finished reading it I just wanted to read more of it. I really loved your epilogue, I would have been so upset if they just stopped fighting and became some sort of sappy couple you usually get at the end of most stories.
Wow I've never written such a long review before. So all I'm really trying to say is I loved your story.
| sarabeth120 chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
Hi there! Unfortunately, I'm not here to review your story. I'm here to let you know that someone has posted this story in its entirety on another site. Here is the link: justinbieberfanfiction . ?sid20288&chapter1