|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| elma chapter 8 . 6/11/2011
I love remington's point of view! and i really loved the letter :D i loved the tone of voice and how she KNEW she was ruining her dignity/pride yet she did it in a way that made her cool/endearing... somehow. seriously. but maybe just because he's remington did he read the letter like that. if that letter was directed to... jonah! (i recalled his name) i'm sure the reaction would be very different HAHA
on to the next chapter! :D
| trippy.cat.girl chapter 14 . 6/10/2011
Haha I love this story! It's really funny and the plot is really good! Just letting you know, it's scientifically proven that you can't get sick from being outside in bad weather, so...yeah. Still love the story though!
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/31/2011
I guess that it is sort of like fate that I stumbled across this story. It kept me up until 2:00 AM- not that I was going to sleep anyways... I love this story! You are a great writer! The plot was great and so were the characters. Some parts brought tears to my eyes (it's really amazing when words can do that) and others sent a rush of warmth through my body. I wish that my twin an I had a bond like Remeberance and Remmington. I am having trouble to find just the right words to describe this but I am having a lot of trouble. Very captivating. I loved learning about the journals and about journals and the ending was so sweet. I can proudly say that I have re-read this story about 15 times and that enjoyed even more each time.
| Serena chapter 26 . 5/22/2011
Okay so I think I've accepted that I'm not going to get any sleep at all tonight, because it is now 6:30 in the morning and I have class in two hours! Do you see how wonderfully enjoyable your writing is? How entertaining your characters are and how gripping the plots? I curse you and your talent to the ends of the earth! But before I do that I might just go check out the other stories you've written ... Oh dear god, I'm probably going to skip class, aren't I?
| Nothing But A Dreamer chapter 26 . 5/21/2011
I so love you dear author! Thank you for painting my life with these stories. I'm so happy~!
| thisaccountisdeleted45 chapter 26 . 5/16/2011
I honestly have to say that this is probably the best fictionpress story I have ever read and I have read my fare share of fictionpress. The characters, dialouge, plot, word choice was all really amazing. I don't think a sequal is necessary because you have adressed all the main issues. Continue to keep writing...
| Celestial-Panda chapter 26 . 5/11/2011
That was amazing. :D
Very well-written, and just... awesome. xD Quite entertaining, to say the least. I loved it. :D Great job, you're a really good author.
| XtremeAngell chapter 26 . 5/8/2011
Two of your stories in one day (three in two days) 'Quandries of a quirky romantic', 'Nobody says it was easy' and this one. WOW. You are seriously talented writer. I ate every word you wrote.
In this one I felt you based your story purely on their feelings and you did it amazingly well, so intense I felt them.
Your characthers were great. I especially liked that they were far from perfect even the sweet and caring Remington.
I'm kinda greatful you didn't make a sequel(Not that I wouldn't have read it if did make one, cause i deffintely would). But there is just some things you can never fix in your life and I'm glad that it was perfectly imperfect (as you've pointed out in both stories) ;)
Thank you for the story I enjoyed it very much!
| ripplingebbulience chapter 5 . 5/3/2011
"He's tranquil waters to my typhoon."
| Ashley4287 chapter 26 . 4/29/2011
this was a really good story (have you heard that before?) ahaha yea well i loved discovering the characters throughout the story, the way they discovered everything too. you should get this published or something
| Elishar chapter 26 . 4/28/2011
Speechless. You are nothing but a real bad-ass brilliant writer, hun. (That's how I choose my words when I'm happy. Weird, huh?) I fell in love with the characters, really. Now I'm wishing I had a twin, a mortal enemy/boyfriend, a singing Chris as a roommate (Actually Time After Time is one of my favorite songs), and a best friend who is (I think) as crazy as I am.
And I love the epilogue. It was like a teaser. Most romantic stories end with the couple having got married and having children, but with yours, it teased me into thinking that they too soon will but before that they will experience more of life. And it excited me.
Well, my summer really got brighter with this. And that's saying a lot. ()
| Elishar chapter 23 . 4/28/2011
Oh my god! Let's call up Merriam and Collins because their definition of the word "hate" is all wrong!
| Elishar chapter 18 . 4/28/2011
Reading this chapter late in the afternoon, in a rainy summer, and inside a dark room is really getting it all out of me! But then I just had to listen to the song "Hear You Me" and feel shy tears ooze from my eyes. I am torturing myself, and I love it. You did a really good job at this!
| Elishar chapter 9 . 4/27/2011
LOL! I just began liking this band "All American Rejects" and fell addicted to their song "Hope It Gives You Hell", and then I found this story and started reading it. I can't believe how good they go together! Reading Jonah and Remembrance fight like there's no tomorrow with the song as the background - It rocks! \m/ (Lame choices of words, my apologies. But really this story is awesome!)
| larafrancesca chapter 26 . 4/26/2011
I thought your story developed really well. A writer cannot always express how their characters change and grow, but it's something you've managed to do incredably well. I'll admit that I wasn't to certain about this story when I began reading it, it seemed to start off slightly petty and immiture (Jonah and Mem). But the way in which it deepend just shows that you improved while creating thier story. And as an author I think that's all anyone can ask for. I enjoyed reading it and liked the ending (the whole sketch book idea was sweet and fit perfectly - especially the last drawing of Jonah, that was ingenius). I think Jonah may be my favourite character, for the way in which his true personality (which I love) came through. But I am intrestead to check out your story on Chris, he seems fun and caring.
I guess now I'll simply say well done and, thank you for sharing your writing.
Take care, Lara