Reviews for When You Own the Universe |
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![]() ![]() I finally finished your story and I adore it! The characters are so intriguing and unique. I love the plot of your story. There's so much more to a person than what meets the eye... your story shows that. Your story is actually the first story that I've read on FictionPress and I'm glad I did. I really enjoyed it. The details in your story are amazing, I could picture it like a movie playing in my head. Fantastic job on the story! |
![]() ![]() Haha, your A/N was half the length of this chapter! :) I like it so far, Lara |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! I just reread both QoaQR and this story, and I still love them so much! :D You're such a fantastic writer! I heard that you had another story posted called The Matchmaker's Best Friend, but you then took it down? I was wondering whether there's still any way for me to read it? :) Cheers, xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm liking this!:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOLwtf She manages to blow things out of proportion. A lot. That is such a weird thing to do five minutes after telling your boyfriend you love him...but it is in keeping with character I guess. (: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. Well, I thought Elliot was the secret admirer... Guess that means I was wrong on two accounts. Yes, I did not see that coming. At all. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, oops. Jonah's already lost the harder part of the bet... And standing up for mem as well? Hmm. I wonder what she did to him on his first day o,o |
![]() ![]() ![]() _o does that mean he's lost the bet...? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw i just love ur epilogue. definitely not the usual cheesy ending! at least, not the traditional happy cheesy type! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG this part brought tears to my eyes! when jonah comforts mem! n my heart was just clenching in my chest! |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love this story! (I love all of yours) :) You are SO talented! Just such a great story! I've always been a sucker for red hair! I love Jonah's hair! :) haha |
![]() ![]() i just have to say that this was one of the most beautifully written stories i have ever read! i could not stop reading, I really hope you continue to write because you have a wonderful gift and you are just soo talented. this story is amazing! : ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVE YOU (the author), I REALLY DO!..thank you for bringing this joy into my life, it has brightened the darkest of days!...Im in LOVE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOVE the name Remembrance! Very creative. The humorous side of her is great. I totally have a thing for Rem. I've always liked protagonists' brothers! ;) He's cute and intelligent, I like that about him. Great chapter, this is going to be a great story! x mandy ~review marathon, link on my profile~ |