|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| passiononfire chapter 19 . 1/12/2011
so i don't know if im just not that bright but when did this second kiss with jonah happen? like right after she said sorry and stuff or just randomly? i feel kinda dumb for asking...
| passiononfire chapter 18 . 1/12/2011
aw...i feel so bad for jonah (
and i think im crushing on him a little bit, lol )
| passiononfire chapter 11 . 1/12/2011
so first i was shocked at jonah being a virgin and then he kisses mem! i love the cliffhanger. and i want to know what mem did to change jonah into a womanizer
| passiononfire chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
ugh, that michael is SO mean. i hope mem does something spectacular!
| passiononfire chapter 7 . 1/12/2011
omg, im so excited about this bet! but i don't either of them to leave. they are way too interesting together!
| passiononfire chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
"TIME AFTER TIME!"
haha, that made me laugh. by the way, does jonah's roommate have a name?
| passiononfire chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
aw, this sounds like a cute story! remembrance is such an unusual name. looking forward to reading the rest of it!
| ChemicalHazzard chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Liked it up to the part where I saw "jonah's pov" :(
| mushy.mushroom chapter 26 . 12/28/2010
when i read this story i was kinda irritated by jonah pretending and all that but after i finished it i liked -liked would be an understatement- loved it! also the protectiveness of remington for his sister i really liked that part!
anyways! i really really liked the whole plot so write one of your amazing ideas again!
| nazarskyblue chapter 11 . 12/24/2010
in the beginning where u mention about her wanting to get into the white house its not 'first wife' its 'first woman'... i love the story; jonah is just too cute (and yes i say this w/o actually seeing him)
| urtenshii chapter 26 . 12/21/2010
:) that was a real nice story.
I seriously think you posses great writing abilities :)
Congratulations on this one.
Hope you continue on writing !
More power !
| siLentangeL17 chapter 26 . 12/13/2010
This is such an amazing story!
| Too Much Info chapter 26 . 11/26/2010
Apparently this was in a cliche community but I don't think it was cliche at all.
You did amazing.
| Too Much Info chapter 22 . 11/26/2010
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!
It was funny.
"What kind of leading male are you?"
Wow. She gets mad at him for THAT.
'It didn't take a genius to figure out how this was going to end: I was going to die.
End of story.
Oh God, why did I ever have to get involved with the Pierce twins?'
I loved the ending to this chapter.
And I love your story, too.
| elanbu chapter 18 . 11/17/2010
Rereading this story after a few years, and this chapter specifically, is really powerful. I think the dialogue sounds much more realistic than in other chapters, and the energy is just great.