Reviews for When You Own the Universe
passiononfire chapter 24 . 1/12/2011
this is such a good chapter. elliot and remmy!
passiononfire chapter 22 . 1/12/2011
haha "What kind of leading male are you?"

Favorite. Line. EVER.
passiononfire chapter 20 . 1/12/2011
:O

that is all i can express at the moment... :O...Elliot and jonah?
passiononfire chapter 19 . 1/12/2011
so i don't know if im just not that bright but when did this second kiss with jonah happen? like right after she said sorry and stuff or just randomly? i feel kinda dumb for asking...
passiononfire chapter 18 . 1/12/2011
aw...i feel so bad for jonah (

and i think im crushing on him a little bit, lol )
passiononfire chapter 11 . 1/12/2011
so first i was shocked at jonah being a virgin and then he kisses mem! i love the cliffhanger. and i want to know what mem did to change jonah into a womanizer
passiononfire chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
ugh, that michael is SO mean. i hope mem does something spectacular!
passiononfire chapter 7 . 1/12/2011
omg, im so excited about this bet! but i don't either of them to leave. they are way too interesting together!
passiononfire chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
"TIME AFTER TIME!"

haha, that made me laugh. by the way, does jonah's roommate have a name?
passiononfire chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
aw, this sounds like a cute story! remembrance is such an unusual name. looking forward to reading the rest of it!
ChemicalHazzard chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Liked it up to the part where I saw "jonah's pov" :(
mushy.mushroom chapter 26 . 12/28/2010
when i read this story i was kinda irritated by jonah pretending and all that but after i finished it i liked -liked would be an understatement- loved it! also the protectiveness of remington for his sister i really liked that part!

anyways! i really really liked the whole plot so write one of your amazing ideas again!

kimmie~
nazarskyblue chapter 11 . 12/24/2010
in the beginning where u mention about her wanting to get into the white house its not 'first wife' its 'first woman'... i love the story; jonah is just too cute (and yes i say this w/o actually seeing him)
urtenshii chapter 26 . 12/21/2010
:) that was a real nice story.

I seriously think you posses great writing abilities :)

Congratulations on this one.

Hope you continue on writing !

More power !
siLentangeL17 chapter 26 . 12/13/2010
This is such an amazing story!
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