|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| nano chapter 6 . 9/30/2010
plot is buildimg very good
| nano chapter 5 . 9/30/2010
LOLz...was realy funny...haha
| nano chapter 4 . 9/30/2010
jonah is rather low in the previous chapter but pitty him in this one...aw
| noone chapter 1 . 9/30/2010
duh, you should though you already did
| fairydustillusion chapter 26 . 9/21/2010
WOOW! I loved this story! you developed your characters perfectly. I LOVED jonahxremembrance, they're so sweet together. Jonah's character is sexy :) haha. anywaays. I wish you could do a sequel, but yeah, I agree with you. How about a one shot then? ;D please?
| sarcasm is my middle name chapter 26 . 9/20/2010
Awesome story... so cute :))
| The-Angel-Illusion chapter 26 . 9/10/2010
Wow that was an absolutely amazing story. I loved how you started out with stereotypical students with not much depth then turned it all around and showed us how these characters were actually extremely realistic. Very well done. Absolutely loved the story And I loved how it wasn't a lovey dovey everything is perfect ending (or happily ever after). This was much more realistic and interesting. (I loved Chris!)
| chelsey now and then chapter 26 . 9/8/2010
i love this! amazing! aww, they're just so cute to each other!
| romz chapter 26 . 9/7/2010
WOW! Great story! I love it, love it, love it.. :D
I love that Jonah drew those sketches for Mem. It's so romantic.
And this last chapter is so lovely, too. Jonah doesn't understand woman, ha2..
Thanks for writing this. I love reading it. :)
| Experimenter chapter 7 . 8/27/2010
I really like it. Catchy opening, nice flow. It's a very enjoyable read :)
| DayDreamer457 chapter 26 . 8/23/2010
Yellow is an awesome song. This is an awesome are an awesome writer.I love the fact that this is an original story, with a surprisingly sweet plot.
| Cheryl White chapter 5 . 8/12/2010
My friend recommended this story to me, and I've got to say, I was pretty hooked from just her description! This story is so entertaining and funny so far, but you can really work on your grammar, typos and spelling.
Aside from that, this story is great! And it's absolutely amazing that it got 30 reviews! Congrats! I'd KILL to be able to write a story like this! :]
| late reader chapter 20 . 8/2/2010
i like this story so far-even though both jonah and remembrance are a BIT on the whiny side (i know it's justified, but they seriously wallow a LOT, especially remembrance)-but before i go on to the next chapter i have to say something:
not all irish people say things like "bonny wee lad" and "aye, miss" and have red hair!
i know many of them do, but this chapter came across as a tad stereotypical. just saying.
it's still a good story though, so i'll keep reading :D
| MeMe chapter 26 . 7/23/2010
I love this story.
I read it already, a few years ago, but I stumbled across it and reread it.
Great story... I wish we could have found out what happened btween Jonah and his mom...
The sketch pad... brilliant. That was the sweetest thing EVER
Great story :)
| Bittu chapter 26 . 7/18/2010
I LOVED IT
to all real men...this is what you strive to be!