Reviews for When You Own the Universe
passiononfire chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
ugh, that michael is SO mean. i hope mem does something spectacular!
passiononfire chapter 7 . 1/12/2011
omg, im so excited about this bet! but i don't either of them to leave. they are way too interesting together!
passiononfire chapter 3 . 1/12/2011
"TIME AFTER TIME!"

haha, that made me laugh. by the way, does jonah's roommate have a name?
passiononfire chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
aw, this sounds like a cute story! remembrance is such an unusual name. looking forward to reading the rest of it!
ChemicalHazzard chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Liked it up to the part where I saw "jonah's pov" :(
mushy.mushroom chapter 26 . 12/28/2010
when i read this story i was kinda irritated by jonah pretending and all that but after i finished it i liked -liked would be an understatement- loved it! also the protectiveness of remington for his sister i really liked that part!

anyways! i really really liked the whole plot so write one of your amazing ideas again!

kimmie~
nazarskyblue chapter 11 . 12/24/2010
in the beginning where u mention about her wanting to get into the white house its not 'first wife' its 'first woman'... i love the story; jonah is just too cute (and yes i say this w/o actually seeing him)
urtenshii chapter 26 . 12/21/2010
:) that was a real nice story.

I seriously think you posses great writing abilities :)

Congratulations on this one.

Hope you continue on writing !

More power !
siLentangeL17 chapter 26 . 12/13/2010
This is such an amazing story!
Too Much Info chapter 26 . 11/26/2010
Apparently this was in a cliche community but I don't think it was cliche at all.

You did amazing.
Too Much Info chapter 22 . 11/26/2010
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

It was funny.

"What kind of leading male are you?"

Wow. She gets mad at him for THAT.

'It didn't take a genius to figure out how this was going to end: I was going to die.

End of story.

Literally.

Oh God, why did I ever have to get involved with the Pierce twins?'

I loved the ending to this chapter.

And I love your story, too.
elanbu chapter 18 . 11/17/2010
Rereading this story after a few years, and this chapter specifically, is really powerful. I think the dialogue sounds much more realistic than in other chapters, and the energy is just great.
freedom2619 chapter 26 . 11/16/2010
love the end !

jajjaajaja...johan is so funny xD
allaehs chapter 26 . 11/9/2010
I love your story. It is one of my favorite :D I really like Jonah ;)
Princess Mariana chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Can some one literally...buy someone? Isn't that unconstitutional or something?
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