Reviews for When You Own the Universe
bridgettblah chapter 4 . 1/15/2011
Oh my god, you have a lot of reviews...Haha. My oh My, this is good. I loove that she punched him xD Girls can hit too! But, Im kinda scared of him O.o
bridgettblah chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
Aw! I really like this! I think the whole 'being sold' thing is just HILARIOUS! And I like this Jonah guy. He and Remembrance (Awesome name..)seem like the headbutt A LOT! They both seem like bold, loud characters to me. At least from this first chapter. And, I love that his hair is red. Is it like, dyed bright blood red or is it a natural *Ehem* 'ginger' color? I'm thinking bright but honestly, I'm just happy its red at all. I have an obsession with red hair...Haha
passiononfire chapter 25 . 1/12/2011
opps, i didnt mean I kept getting better and better. i meant IT (the story) kept getting better.
passiononfire chapter 26 . 1/12/2011
Such an amazing story! i just kept getting better and better! and i love that you didn't do a normal epilogue. but this story is really amazing. i hope you keep on writing!
passiononfire chapter 24 . 1/12/2011
this is such a good chapter. elliot and remmy!
passiononfire chapter 22 . 1/12/2011
haha "What kind of leading male are you?"

Favorite. Line. EVER.
passiononfire chapter 20 . 1/12/2011

that is all i can express at the moment... :O...Elliot and jonah?
passiononfire chapter 19 . 1/12/2011
so i don't know if im just not that bright but when did this second kiss with jonah happen? like right after she said sorry and stuff or just randomly? i feel kinda dumb for asking...
passiononfire chapter 18 . 1/12/2011
aw...i feel so bad for jonah (

and i think im crushing on him a little bit, lol )
passiononfire chapter 11 . 1/12/2011
so first i was shocked at jonah being a virgin and then he kisses mem! i love the cliffhanger. and i want to know what mem did to change jonah into a womanizer
passiononfire chapter 9 . 1/12/2011
ugh, that michael is SO mean. i hope mem does something spectacular!
passiononfire chapter 7 . 1/12/2011
omg, im so excited about this bet! but i don't either of them to leave. they are way too interesting together!
passiononfire chapter 3 . 1/12/2011

haha, that made me laugh. by the way, does jonah's roommate have a name?
passiononfire chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
aw, this sounds like a cute story! remembrance is such an unusual name. looking forward to reading the rest of it!
ChemicalHazzard chapter 2 . 1/1/2011
Liked it up to the part where I saw "jonah's pov" :(
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