when i read this story i was kinda irritated by jonah pretending and all that but after i finished it i liked -liked would be an understatement- loved it! also the protectiveness of remington for his sister i really liked that part!

anyways! i really really liked the whole plot so write one of your amazing ideas again!

kimmie~

in the beginning where u mention about her wanting to get into the white house its not 'first wife' its 'first woman'... i love the story; jonah is just too cute (and yes i say this w/o actually seeing him)

:) that was a real nice story.

I seriously think you posses great writing abilities :)

Congratulations on this one.

Hope you continue on writing !

More power !

This is such an amazing story!

Apparently this was in a cliche community but I don't think it was cliche at all.

You did amazing.

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!

It was funny.

"What kind of leading male are you?"

Wow. She gets mad at him for THAT.

'It didn't take a genius to figure out how this was going to end: I was going to die.

End of story.

Literally.

Oh God, why did I ever have to get involved with the Pierce twins?'

I loved the ending to this chapter.

And I love your story, too.

Rereading this story after a few years, and this chapter specifically, is really powerful. I think the dialogue sounds much more realistic than in other chapters, and the energy is just great.

love the end !

jajjaajaja...johan is so funny xD

I love your story. It is one of my favorite :D I really like Jonah ;)

Can some one literally...buy someone? Isn't that unconstitutional or something?

I really, really liked this story. It's amazing; you're an amazing writer. your writing skills were greatly improved towards the end of the story, and that's great! i love the plot line as well, but the thing i loved most about this story is the characters' development. they started out as some stereotypical students but you somehow showed us that the characters do have some depth in them and they are very realistic. i'm so glad i came across this story (:

lol, Can't wait to read more.

i loved this!

absolutely brilliant!

well done :D

this is a lovely story. wonderful storyline and characters, and your writing style is great too, though there are some minor grammar mistakes. overall, I really loved this story. and I gotta say I can totally see the significant improvement in your writing skill throughout the story. Keep on writing, love. you are an amazing one.

This is just such a cute story, I read it through in a day's time. There were a few errors sprinkled through the chapters, but the plot more than made up for it.