Reviews for When You Own the Universe
mushy.mushroom chapter 26 . 12/28/2010
when i read this story i was kinda irritated by jonah pretending and all that but after i finished it i liked -liked would be an understatement- loved it! also the protectiveness of remington for his sister i really liked that part!

anyways! i really really liked the whole plot so write one of your amazing ideas again!

nazarskyblue chapter 11 . 12/24/2010
in the beginning where u mention about her wanting to get into the white house its not 'first wife' its 'first woman'... i love the story; jonah is just too cute (and yes i say this w/o actually seeing him)
urtenshii chapter 26 . 12/21/2010
:) that was a real nice story.

I seriously think you posses great writing abilities :)

Congratulations on this one.

Hope you continue on writing !

More power !
siLentangeL17 chapter 26 . 12/13/2010
This is such an amazing story!
Too Much Info chapter 26 . 11/26/2010
Apparently this was in a cliche community but I don't think it was cliche at all.

You did amazing.
Too Much Info chapter 22 . 11/26/2010

It was funny.

"What kind of leading male are you?"

Wow. She gets mad at him for THAT.

'It didn't take a genius to figure out how this was going to end: I was going to die.

End of story.


Oh God, why did I ever have to get involved with the Pierce twins?'

I loved the ending to this chapter.

And I love your story, too.
elanbu chapter 18 . 11/17/2010
Rereading this story after a few years, and this chapter specifically, is really powerful. I think the dialogue sounds much more realistic than in other chapters, and the energy is just great.
freedom2619 chapter 26 . 11/16/2010
love the end !

jajjaajaja...johan is so funny xD
allaehs chapter 26 . 11/9/2010
I love your story. It is one of my favorite :D I really like Jonah ;)
Princess Mariana chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Can some one someone? Isn't that unconstitutional or something?
midnight tales chapter 26 . 11/3/2010
I really, really liked this story. It's amazing; you're an amazing writer. your writing skills were greatly improved towards the end of the story, and that's great! i love the plot line as well, but the thing i loved most about this story is the characters' development. they started out as some stereotypical students but you somehow showed us that the characters do have some depth in them and they are very realistic. i'm so glad i came across this story (:
Xoder chapter 2 . 10/26/2010
lol, Can't wait to read more.
The Weatherwitch chapter 26 . 10/15/2010
i loved this!

absolutely brilliant!

well done :D
Abcde chapter 26 . 10/3/2010
this is a lovely story. wonderful storyline and characters, and your writing style is great too, though there are some minor grammar mistakes. overall, I really loved this story. and I gotta say I can totally see the significant improvement in your writing skill throughout the story. Keep on writing, love. you are an amazing one.
purplehost chapter 26 . 10/2/2010
This is just such a cute story, I read it through in a day's time. There were a few errors sprinkled through the chapters, but the plot more than made up for it.
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