|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| Squidoo chapter 26 . 10/9/2013
I GAVE YOU 5 OUT OF 5 STARS. I FOUND ANOTHER GREAT STORY. YAY. Anyways, I think you should change the genre to drama and hurt/comfort instead of drama and humor. Because instead of laughing too much, I happen cried A LOT in every single chapters. Man, I love a sappy angsty story that you might call me a masochist or whatever is that because I love the pain that I feel whenever I read a story, and you're successfully torturing me with that pain and I love how it feels.
And btw, I love the epilogue especially this convo:
"Already planning their births?"
"Depends on how long you're going to fight to stay with me." She whispered in return of my question.
"I'll fight for you, always."
ADFGJSKHBNKKDIOOUGWUUIFJJDJJCK MAN. I. LOVE. JONAH. SO MUCH. I SWEAR TO GOD.
I WANT A GUY LIKE HIM IN MY LIFE. CRYING.
Okay, sorry for my fangirl inner. It'll be out after I read such a beautiful story just like this story of yours. And to be honest why I like the story is because all the characters were having the same issues as me. The family issues. The needed of having someone to share your feelings, to care about, and to be loved and wanted. No one wants me, sadly. I'm 15 years old and I never knew how it feels like to have a boyfriend and to be loved and wanted. I have family, but since my parents divorced, we're fucked up. My sisters went wild, I lost contact with my father, my mother's becoming an atheist well I actually didn't her religion. She's half Muslim and half Christian, so I coinsidered her as an atheist (God, forgive me) Okay, enough with my life story. Well, the difference about your characters and me is that I sometimes opened up with my friend. Okay, I don't have bestfriend. Too bad.
Uhm, and hey do you have twitter or facebook? Or maybe email? I'd like to get to know you more! Is it okay if I wanted to be your friend?
Anyways, sorry for my grammatical errors. English isn't my native language neither do it's my mother's language.
Least but not last, I put your story to my favorite story list.
| monkeyyy chapter 26 . 10/8/2013
I will admit, I gradually grew to love this... now I want more... iunno but like... imagining him all sheepish with his accent UUGH *can't taek it*
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/26/2013
I like that you find time to reply to every single persons reviews.
| c-aa-it143 chapter 26 . 8/25/2013
oh my freaking god
I love this so freaking much
I so hope someone doesn't copy this story then you'll have to delete it , cause that's happened so many times to such great stories and I don't want this story to be taken down :(
I LOVE IT great job
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/24/2013
Aww Remington is so adorable
| Spread the love chapter 26 . 8/19/2013
Aw, this is so cute! I love it! I have to admit, this has been quite the emotional roller coaster ride. I would love it if a guy did that for me, but Remembrance and Jonah's romance story is just the best. I love it, always. You're amazing! Be proud. I just love it.
| how could you chapter 21 . 8/19/2013
O-O YES. FINALLY. I'M SO GLAD I DIDN'T DROP THIS STORY. YOU, MY DEAR FRIEND, ARE AWESOME.
| how could you chapter 20 . 8/19/2013
What!? Nooooooo! Oh man, I think I'm going to drop this story. How could he do that... And how could she be so awful? *breaks down*
| Belly boo1099 chapter 26 . 8/18/2013
Cute story! I didnt expect things to turn out like they did but i quite liked it!
| Drama fanatic chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
O.O And the truth reveals... I hope he doesn't start... really really hating her! I mean, it's like he likes her... Oh, the suspense!
| Nyanyaboo chapter 15 . 8/18/2013
...aaaaaww! So cute! Jonah's so nice! Hm... I'm noticing an off and on thing with the two. Like a love and hate relationship. I hope Jonah feels better! And Alicia gets expelled from the earth!
| Lalalalah chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
Aw... That Alicia! Mem's going to kill her! So, it looks like Jonah's starting to harbor feelings for the female Pierce, eh? Hehehehe, can't wait for the romance!
| justintime chapter 13 . 8/18/2013
Okay, I SOOOO hate Alicia! She was so not the SA! She tricked all the good and kind in the world! Behead her! *sigh* Mem, you have got to learn to choose better friends. You go, Rem! Now, I'm seriously wondering if Rem's roommate is his secret admirer... What are the odds?
| Shalalalalapop chapter 12 . 8/18/2013
I want to guess that Alicia and Rem are going to be together by the end of this story, but that's just me. Ha! Take that Jonah! Mem won the first round! Now I wonder how she's going to find out all his secrets... Aw, Jonah cares about her! Well, cares that she's disturbing him in the night. But he did help her. Yay!
| Guest chapter 11 . 8/18/2013
Oh no, he didn't!