Reviews for When You Own the Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Hey there! Really nice story! DA-chen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, you're really good at building up suspense! I'm dying to find out what happened in Jonah's past. Obviously his mum died and he somehow thinks he's to blame? Well anyway, this story is so awesome so far! I even teared up a bit reading this chapter :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, I'm crying too! I can't believe its over! I don't know when this was started or ended, but it felt like I knew everybody and now they are gone! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh My Gosh... that was amazing! Great job on this story! Peace, Bubbly Girl |
![]() ![]() ![]() this story is seriously cute, entertaining, and amazing! love it(: |
![]() ![]() ![]() I practically enjoyed reading this story, and i wasn't expecting that kind of epilogue to come up. To Tell you the truth I got emotional on the whole parent-child relation, anyway Like I said I really enjoyed reading this and hope to read more stories from you :) P.S I wish you would make a side story or something about Chris he seems to be a really interesting kind of Guy and i want to no more about him |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ha ha, she punched him in the face! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the names in this story! So unique! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This sounds good so far! I love how it's not one of those 'goody-two shoes and bad boy fall in love' stories. Keep going! |
![]() ![]() That story was excellent. I enjoyed reading it so much. Here was my favorite line: "because hate isn't the opposite of love, it isn't even close. Hate is just...angrily caring about someone. Hate is feeling something so passionate about someone, that you can't help but show it. Just like love is". I love that. Great story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG I am in love with this story.. One of my friends recomended me to read it and my oarents could not get me off the computer because i just had to finish it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed reading this story! I loved that your epilogue wasn't a 'traditional' epilogue; it was more interesting to read that way and I found it amusing. I would just suggest to perhaps change the names for your chapters because they tend to give away what it going to happen in that chapter. You don't want to give away spoilers through your chapter names. Anyways that's just what I think and you definitely don't have to change anything that you don't want to. I really hope you do still consider writing Chris's story because I would really want to read that and find out what about this singing insomniac. Lol. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Haha, bluegrass version? "Ah droo a lun, ah droo a lun fooer y'all, an' all them things y'all deeo, an' it was all yeller" 8-D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm joping Elliot is Remmy's secret admirer? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whelp, I was wrong. Who's his admirer? I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY want to know! I'm assuming it's some nobody that we don't meet till the last chapter? ... Pwease tell me? Pwease? 83 |