Reviews for When You Own the Universe
DA-chen1 chapter 11 . 2/4/2010
Hey there!

Really nice story!

fullofsunshine chapter 6 . 1/30/2010
Wow, you're really good at building up suspense! I'm dying to find out what happened in Jonah's past. Obviously his mum died and he somehow thinks he's to blame? Well anyway, this story is so awesome so far! I even teared up a bit reading this chapter :P
Tanyalizing chapter 26 . 1/29/2010
Aw, I'm crying too! I can't believe its over! I don't know when this was started or ended, but it felt like I knew everybody and now they are gone!
Bubbly Girl chapter 26 . 1/28/2010
Oh My Gosh... that was amazing! Great job on this story!


Bubbly Girl
xxjoceyuxx chapter 26 . 1/26/2010
this story is seriously cute, entertaining, and amazing! love it(:
LovEInsanity chapter 26 . 1/19/2010
I practically enjoyed reading this story, and i wasn't expecting that kind of epilogue to come up. To Tell you the truth I got emotional on the whole parent-child relation, anyway Like I said I really enjoyed reading this and hope to read more stories from you :)


I wish you would make a side story or something about Chris he seems to be a really interesting kind of Guy and i want to no more about him
Pseudonym59 chapter 3 . 1/18/2010
Ha ha, she punched him in the face!
Pseudonym59 chapter 2 . 1/18/2010
I love the names in this story! So unique!
Pseudonym59 chapter 1 . 1/18/2010
This sounds good so far! I love how it's not one of those 'goody-two shoes and bad boy fall in love' stories. Keep going!
hgirl672 chapter 26 . 1/15/2010
That story was excellent. I enjoyed reading it so much. Here was my favorite line: "because hate isn't the opposite of love, it isn't even close. Hate is just...angrily caring about someone. Hate is feeling something so passionate about someone, that you can't help but show it. Just like love is". I love that. Great story!
P3N3LOP3-ROS3 chapter 26 . 1/12/2010
OMG I am in love with this story.. One of my friends recomended me to read it and my oarents could not get me off the computer because i just had to finish it
MarieAnn chapter 26 . 1/4/2010
I really enjoyed reading this story! I loved that your epilogue wasn't a 'traditional' epilogue; it was more interesting to read that way and I found it amusing. I would just suggest to perhaps change the names for your chapters because they tend to give away what it going to happen in that chapter. You don't want to give away spoilers through your chapter names. Anyways that's just what I think and you definitely don't have to change anything that you don't want to. I really hope you do still consider writing Chris's story because I would really want to read that and find out what about this singing insomniac. Lol. Great job!
CoHOCD chapter 26 . 1/2/2010
Haha, bluegrass version? "Ah droo a lun, ah droo a lun fooer y'all, an' all them things y'all deeo, an' it was all yeller" 8-D
CoHOCD chapter 19 . 1/2/2010
I'm joping Elliot is Remmy's secret admirer?
CoHOCD chapter 13 . 1/1/2010
Whelp, I was wrong. Who's his admirer? I REALLY, REALLY, REALLY want to know! I'm assuming it's some nobody that we don't meet till the last chapter? ... Pwease tell me? Pwease? 83
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