Reviews for When You Own the Universe
shnuffy88 chapter 4 . 3/16/2004
Great story so far, but you have to update! It's almost been 5 months.
allison tyler chapter 4 . 3/7/2004
yay good story!
LeoraWolf chapter 3 . 2/18/2004
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE PLEASE! Oh yes very good so far.
crazyreadergirl chapter 4 . 2/18/2004
u have not updated in a while. what's up?
cool story. please u.
serif chapter 4 . 2/15/2004
this seems really cool. i'm desperate to know what happens next. update soon.
Miss Meticulous chapter 4 . 2/11/2004
I love this! I was laughing so hard when I read it. I cannot believe her bother sold her! LOL! Update as soon as you possibly can!
gurl chapter 4 . 2/8/2004
pls. update soon! pls! gurl_08
crazyreadergirl chapter 4 . 2/7/2004
cool! write more soon!
Silken Silver Berries chapter 4 . 1/28/2004
YES! i loved it! fantastic! i LOVE her! love her love her LOVE HER! absolutely cool! i WANT TO BE REMEMBRANCE!, not quite...i mean...yeah,, no, no i don't...i think i've got myself convinced. i like her attitude, and i like her smarts, and i love her situation with the dick. those three combined is why i want to be her. there, now that i've got that all settled...
lol, anyway, great work! i really like it so far! PLEASE update! please please please? pretty please? with cherries on top! lots of berries! peanut butter! chocolate sauce! whatever you want! JUST UPDATE! please?
anyway, so please (i think you've already GOTTEN THE POINT, but i'll throw it in again anyway, and my mouth is hanging open...hmm..CLOSE) update, soon! i want to see what happens! mind you, i'm a nice on to talk, i haven't gotten anything new up since the twenty-third of november last year, which is AWFUL but that's besides the point. YOU need to update, NOW! lol...sorry...couldn't resist..
anyway, yeah i'm going. great work! i'm really impressed! there are some grammar related things here and there that aren't quite right, but it's really really good! keep up the good work! please put up a new chappie soon! i'm dying to see what happens! *hug* loves,
hey...could you review my story...please? let me know what you think? thanks, dear, lol
Silken Silver Berries chapter 3 . 1/28/2004
SWEET! tell me she took him out! die die die! evil boy! evil! evil i tell you!
evil boy must die
Silken Silver Berries chapter 2 . 1/28/2004
cool! i like the additive with rem's being jonah's best friend and whatnot. and i like the "your life is mine" phrase. cool! i just noticed that you missed the "r" in some places, where it should have been "your" instead of "you" but otherwise, great work! i'm impressed! *hug* loves,
Silken Silver Berries chapter 1 . 1/28/2004
interesting start...interesting names...i mean for her and her brother. i love "jonah mills." not normally a name i would come to, but now somehow i like it...i like it a lot.
off to the next chapter! *hug* loves,
DEADLY DEAD chapter 4 . 1/27/2004
Your story is GREAT
I can't believe i didn't see it before*hit myself with the keyboared*
Please.. keep up the good work and update soon
tstj chapter 4 . 1/24/2004
Good writing and the details are just right! Update soon! *goes off to read your other stories*
Jessie chapter 4 . 1/11/2004
Woohoo! Another successful story in progress from the lovely Secretive! YAY! I am absolutely in love with The Matchmaker's Best Friend, and when I got finished with what you had up for that story, I came to this one. Definitely almost as good as the other! I love the name calling battle... classic!
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