|Reviews for When You Own the Universe|
| jessie0754 chapter 26 . 12/3/2009
This story was really unique. I enjoyed it, especially how you did the epilogue (doing something mushy might have been cute, but this suited them WAY better :D)
Thanks for the story
| TasteYourSins chapter 26 . 12/3/2009
i have a billion words i wanna tell you just to describe what i feel about this AMAZING story...but...you might get sick of me. ))
anyway, i shall be reading probably ALL of your stories. :)
| TasteYourSins chapter 25 . 12/3/2009
AH. MAY. ZING!
nuff said. B-)
| TasteYourSins chapter 24 . 12/3/2009
WOO! REMMY WATCHED HOW I MET YOUR MOTHER! :D SUPER AWESOME SHOW! :)
damn. Jonah is SO slow! :)) but anyway, 2 more chappies. D
| TasteYourSins chapter 22 . 12/3/2009
AHAHA i burst out laughing when Remmy began chasing him. ))
but i was SUPER pissed when he just blew Mem off. GAH! WHY ARE BOYS SUCH...*grumble*
| TasteYourSins chapter 21 . 12/3/2009
JONAH JUST FAKED IT? THEY JUST FAKED IT?
you love surprising me don't you? ))
gah. FOOLED once again. :
but YEY IT WAS ELLIOT! :D
| TasteYourSins chapter 20 . 12/3/2009
NONONONO! THIS JUST CANNOT HAPPEN!
: oh the angst.
i love angst, tho. i wonder why. memasochist.
| TasteYourSins chapter 19 . 12/3/2009
...now i think i'm pretty sure the SA is Elliott. :)
...but DAMMIT if i'm wrong again. :))
| TasteYourSins chapter 13 . 12/2/2009
...you fooled me. O_O
damn, i feel humiliated. ))
this is exactly why I don't like reciting in class when i'm not sure if it's the right answer. :/
...you didn't have to know that.
| TasteYourSins chapter 12 . 12/2/2009
I have a feeling...
...that Alicia's Remmy's "secret admirer". D
cuz it said that she looked terrified or something when Remembrance talked about hanging out with Remmy. :) but anyway, that was just a thought. ))
| TasteYourSins chapter 5 . 12/1/2009
my god. this is so fucking awesome.
is this review censored? i hope not. ))
| WrittenInTheSand chapter 26 . 11/30/2009
You completely kept me interested in this wonderfully written story:)
Though I did have issues with the angst...you definitely know how to put people to tears.
I loved Elliot, she's as weird as I am. Her relationship with Remmy is so adorable :D
The way you put her in the story, but not showing her for several chapters until Mem switched rooms was genuis. Though I have to admit it was kinda obvious :P But then again that could just be me.
Jonah is definitely intersting.I don't think I've heard of a character much like him. He's not as strong as other male characters, Jonah shows more emotion and his past is heartbreaking. -Made me cry...sniff...too emotional for my own good-
The funny thing, he's Irish. Don't get me wrong, there's nothing wrong with him being Irish, but I'm so used to reading about the male characters being Italian,Spanish,French,English, etc. He's actually the first male character I've heard of that's from Ireland and that's pretty col:D
Remmy is AWESOME:D My definite favorite. That's all that I have to say about him! You made him so that he seemed perfect, likeable, but still relateable. Though as you've shown, he's not as perfect as he seems.
Mem is like how some girls are on the iniside. Though she is the main character, her flaws aren't as difficult to find and they're understandable. But I hate the fact that she's a twin with ? Simple,I WANT A TWIN TOO! -pouts-
Chris was just as didn't seem to be a serious character and though he's a bit...erm...odd? He's funny to read about. I'm with Jonah,being waken up by "Time after time" can be murder, especially in the morning.
Alicia,I'm still a little lost about her,but in the story she's someone you want to hate,but someone you still feel sorry for. I must say, giving her Sex and the City as a sort of theorapy was pretty smart:)
Woow I talk a lot...uh...great, now I got nothing left to say!
Oh here's one: You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to read more from you:D
| eaststar chapter 26 . 11/28/2009
The end got somewhat repetitive and a bit boring. Especially all that dialogue! But I loved the first twenty chapters, it's the last few which need a bit cutting off. Great job! I really liked this!
| xoxo anne chapter 25 . 11/24/2009
This is such a great story.
Sweet, Romantic, ...
some other words I can't think of. xD
| whateva123 chapter 26 . 11/23/2009
great story...it was very emotional and capturing...completely luved it...great characters and love ur style of narration...:D