Reviews for When You Own the Universe
Le Sage chapter 2 . 10/21/2003
Le Sage chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
wow, this sounds realla good! but its really short ! :( make the chapters longer man! waho!
lumanarann chapter 2 . 10/20/2003
good update. interesting idea, and one you can have so much fun with. I'm not sure what the school expects these people to do for the one's that buy them...carry their stuff? serve them lunch? and the deal only lasts during school hours, right?
luvurflyingmonkey123 chapter 2 . 10/20/2003
this is such a great idea. I haven't ever read a story about a concept like this, although I did know that things like "buying" a date did happen. I think you could do great things with this story.

Good job!
Cheese and DG chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
This is a good story! It's just as good as your other one (although i admit i like the matchmaker's best friend more because, well...i just do) Anyways, i think this shall be interesting to see the conflict between these two! I'll be waiting *paciently* for you to update! lol.

RoCk On*~
ShariB chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
Fun! please go on. so... (rubs hands together) does she get to use that steak knife?
peanutilover chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
yes, this chapter helped majorly. looking forward the next installment. and yes, salad tongs were my weapon of choice friday. today it's my flesh eating teddy bear, Shmoo. watch your back if you don't update quickly!
LaFleurRouge chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
AH! If this Jonah guy is a soccer player then you may have just created my dream guy! Shaggy Red hair, baggy jeans, vans, well toned muscles! I swear you just jumped into my dreams or something. This story is just as great as your other one. I hope that you'll go through and finish them both. Please, I have to know that there is a good side to this guy. Or maybe his has a cousin that is just like him but nicer? *deep sigh* Red head...
Zane Lorvusien chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
I'm so glad that you've got Remington's point of veiw I love that this is going to be a really good story also I'm glad you're considering carrying on with runaway. I've just had the clicking Idea for Dance of the Phoenix expect to see it online soon.
Clare chapter 2 . 10/19/2003
Hi again! YAY! another chapter! another very good chapter too, which is always helpful if one wants to keep their readers. Please update soon, as your story is incredibly addictive. I can't wait to find out what Jonah is going to do with Remembrance. OK, I just read over that last part of my review, and it sounded SOO wrong, but I can't be bothered changing it, so oh well, you'll just have to deal.

Anywho must dash, UPDATE SOON (please!)
Haute Couture chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
i love it, i really do. "i am the richest, hottest, most popular guy ever" - oh god, that had me laughing, seriously.

great storyline, no useless mistakes, update soon! :)
oh what now chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Whoa man. Continue, I like it. Sorry for not reviewing the first chapter, it was good. So, continue.. addicting. Btw, does point of view also mean POV?
The one who sees chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
please update soon

i love this story

so so so so so much
madapple chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
This was such an animated chapter! GOOD ON YOU! It was SO funny, and I am SO looking forward to reading this in the future... esp. all the conflict... and I kinda like Jonah's ego-inflated behavior. It's so funny. I love their POV's, and I love Remington! What a sweet brother... :P

continue and you had BETTER update!
IrishVampire13 chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Hehehehehe...Jonah sounds incredibly annoying. Which means that the situation is gonna get very interesting. Haha, can't wait for more. Peace!
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