Reviews for When You Own the Universe |
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![]() ![]() ![]() cool. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, this sounds realla good! but its really short ! :( make the chapters longer man! waho! |
![]() ![]() ![]() good update. interesting idea, and one you can have so much fun with. I'm not sure what the school expects these people to do for the one's that buy them...carry their stuff? serve them lunch? and the deal only lasts during school hours, right? |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is such a great idea. I haven't ever read a story about a concept like this, although I did know that things like "buying" a date did happen. I think you could do great things with this story. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a good story! It's just as good as your other one (although i admit i like the matchmaker's best friend more because, well...i just do) Anyways, i think this shall be interesting to see the conflict between these two! I'll be waiting *paciently* for you to update! lol. RoCk On*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fun! please go on. so... (rubs hands together) does she get to use that steak knife? |
![]() ![]() ![]() yes, this chapter helped majorly. looking forward the next installment. and yes, salad tongs were my weapon of choice friday. today it's my flesh eating teddy bear, Shmoo. watch your back if you don't update quickly! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH! If this Jonah guy is a soccer player then you may have just created my dream guy! Shaggy Red hair, baggy jeans, vans, well toned muscles! I swear you just jumped into my dreams or something. This story is just as great as your other one. I hope that you'll go through and finish them both. Please, I have to know that there is a good side to this guy. Or maybe his has a cousin that is just like him but nicer? *deep sigh* Red head... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad that you've got Remington's point of veiw I love that this is going to be a really good story also I'm glad you're considering carrying on with runaway. I've just had the clicking Idea for Dance of the Phoenix expect to see it online soon. |
![]() ![]() Hi again! YAY! another chapter! another very good chapter too, which is always helpful if one wants to keep their readers. Please update soon, as your story is incredibly addictive. I can't wait to find out what Jonah is going to do with Remembrance. OK, I just read over that last part of my review, and it sounded SOO wrong, but I can't be bothered changing it, so oh well, you'll just have to deal. Anywho must dash, UPDATE SOON (please!) |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it, i really do. "i am the richest, hottest, most popular guy ever" - oh god, that had me laughing, seriously. great storyline, no useless mistakes, update soon! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Whoa man. Continue, I like it. Sorry for not reviewing the first chapter, it was good. So, continue.. addicting. Btw, does point of view also mean POV? |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon i love this story so so so so so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was such an animated chapter! GOOD ON YOU! It was SO funny, and I am SO looking forward to reading this in the future... esp. all the conflict... and I kinda like Jonah's ego-inflated behavior. It's so funny. I love their POV's, and I love Remington! What a sweet brother... :P continue and you had BETTER update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehehehehe...Jonah sounds incredibly annoying. Which means that the situation is gonna get very interesting. Haha, can't wait for more. Peace! |