Reviews for When You Own the Universe
Your Love is Super chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Wow gurl,.you got a LOT of reviews for just a little while. *high five* And I can see why they reviewed. I love it! I absolutely LOVE the names too! Remembrance? That is SOO way cool! I just think of names I've heard before, I never actually make up names! You are awesome gurl!


*TaKuMi FaN~ ViSiT To See sOmE tAkUmI*
pressandclick chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Well I'm glad to see your updating at least one of your stories - just kidding! This chapter was great as are all your other chapters! Good work!
JazzeeT chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
of course i like this chap.. its great seriously. yea i love her name i have a thing with uniques names. nice but yeah... the chemistry has already sizzled between them already. update soon
FamousOneLiners chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
i REALLY like this story, can't wait for more!

Marie Anani chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Okay, now I am in love. Very cute story! Please update soon.

Marie Anani chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
fuzzinuzzi421 chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
They're so going to fall for eachother. Awesome story, awesome chapter, awesome characters.

You write and I'll read!

(please write)
fuzzinuzzi421 chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
I just read chapter one of your story, and so far so good! Theonly point of error that i could find was about half way through in the paragraph that describesd Jonah coming up to the stage. You wrote, "I groaned—there is only one person I of that has hair like that." which is perfectly fine, except that you left out a "know" (I.e. one person I know of who has hair like that)

Other than that teesie tiny little error, superb work!
ck chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Thanks for updating so quickly. I really like this story. I can't wait to see what happens.
kgcyglu chapter 2 . 10/18/2003
Hey, this is a great story. I really like it. I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. Update as soo as you can. Thanks.
Resurrected chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Hey again! I got so depressed with you leaving your story at the end like that so i decided to check out your other stories and let me tell you...this is FANTASTIC! And wow...16 reviews for your first chapter - heaps good! I'm lucky if i even get one for any of mine!

Okay, you definitely have to continue this and update soon plz!
madapple chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
AWESOME! COntinue continue continue continue!

Love the names. I think names make all the difference. Imagine if the main lead was called something like Bob JOnes. Kinda bland. BUt then again, it's just a name. What was it? A rose with any other name would smell just as sweet... gosh! I'm reciting Shakespeare. I must be going mad. :P

Great start! I can't wait to see what the characters will be like.. tee hee!
My Works 87 chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Hey I like this one too! There isn't much to it, but the first chapter has me intrigued. What could become of the two...write more so I can find out! hehe
shadowgirl618 chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
hahaha thats a funny beginning. yes please continue! next chapter please! :)

Zane Lorvusien chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Brilliant first chapter please keep writing story, I'm from England and so we don't really have singles auctions and I don't really know how much $800 is but sounds so much to pay for someone to go out with you for a week who would do that.
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