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   JazzeeT chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 hey another story. i really like this |
| Slideshow chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 What do we think? Should you continue? Honey, are you NUTS? Of course you should continue! That was a great piece of work. Aw I like it already. Your writing is great too. I'm going to check out your other story soon ), cuz it sounds just as good. See ya and update! ~Twi BTW, lol a labret pierce is the chin thingy. You know, right under the lip? And dont feel stupid, because I didnt know what it was until a little before I started to story. My best friend didnt know what it was either hahha. |
| peanutilover chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 what's he want her for? hm.. keep updating, or i shall be forced to come after you wih salad tongs! |
| wolvie chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 that was good, i'd like to read more so please continue! |
| Clare chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 omg! that was really good and it was only the first chapter! I can't wait until you post the next chapter! |
| fabulous faery chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 CONTINUE! its great please keep going! |
| ck chapter 1 . 10/17/2003 Continue with this story. I like it. I can't wait until you update. Plese update quickly to. Thanks. I can't wait. |
| Cooties chapter 1 . 10/16/2003 LOL, sounds really funny! I really like it so far! Update soon! |
| warnthepenguins chapter 1 . 10/16/2003 Crazy. REALLY good initial setup. The reader's dropped into this going "What the hey?" because of the references to slavery and...stuff. When it's revealed to be a more realistic premise, we're still interested. I hope that your story's going to touch on (maybe) the _reason_ that this rich school'd stage such a blatantly exploitative event. I think there're a few sentences that are missing words, but other than that, excellent start. |
| Bomb in the Garden chapter 1 . 10/16/2003 Wow, what a great beginning! You have to continue this otherwise I will be very upset ;P I love the character's names - they're awesome! Update soon plz! |
| BuffLie chapter 1 . 10/16/2003 Ahahah, what a cute idea. I like the name Remembrance, very original. And.. one lil thing (besides the occasional spelling error)... ((Four hundred bucks? What exactly did they think I was going to do? “Eight hundred going once….eight hundred going twice….sold for eight hundred dollars!”)) First it was 400, then 800... I think you meant 400 both times? Yeah. I dunno. This one sounds fun :) So, yes, continue. |
| IrishVampire13 chapter 1 . 10/16/2003 Looks pretty good, thus far; I'm officially curious. I think you should really update this; it could be a lot of fun! |