Reviews for When You Own the Universe
Micheal the Moon chapter 10 . 8/18/2013
Aw... Mem's heading towards the tragic heroine in my category. I can't wait to hear the details on her tragic backstory. It's getting interesting, what with Jonah's unsure feelings on Micheal insulting her, although he doesn't know it was Micheal. O.O Where's Rem?
Nyo chapter 9 . 8/18/2013
O.O Looks to me like Mem is losing... No! Come on girl! Toughen up and use your wits! You can't lose, I'm cheering for you! And Jonah really is a jerk!
laking reaves chapter 8 . 8/18/2013
Oooooh - Heheheheh... Looks like Rem's got a crush! Woot woot, cause I can't whistle. Ooh. I wonder what pills Jonah's taking. And how he feels about the bet. Hm... the feels!
Guest chapter 7 . 8/17/2013
Lol, you totally got me thinking that he was going to Mem. I forgot they hate each other...
OO Sadness... But I like this idea of a bet. It's like... I'm trying to remember an asian drama... They also had twins and the two mains hated each other... I wonder who will fall first? I really hope it's Jonah. That would be perfect.
Guest chapter 6 . 8/17/2013
O.O Aw... I'm sorry! I'm sorry I thought Jonah was a jerk! Poor kid. XC Makes me wanna cry... TT_TT At least he has Mem to make him feel better!
Guest chapter 5 . 8/17/2013
-_- He's so egotistical! I'm gunna die! Please bring my sanity back. But I love the story. The characters are just teeming with live energy. I wish I could write like that... Can't wait for the next chapter! Hehehe, the story's already done so I can just read all the way. No cliffhangers!
Olivia in Hat chapter 4 . 8/17/2013
O.O Uh-oh... cat fight in da house! Scary... O.O
FromOuterSpace chapter 3 . 8/17/2013
Hehehe, I think Jonah's a little jealous! How cute! And of a book! I'm happy Mem isn't all, "OMG, he's so hot" and all that. She has class! I like it! And Rem! Good going bro!
Jungle Theory chapter 2 . 8/17/2013
Wow, Mem's twin brother must really care for her. Now that's twin power! I love how their names are: Mem and Rem. Cool nicknames!
Love It chapter 1 . 8/17/2013
Awesome! I can't wait for Jonah to show some real feelings! So, her name is Remembrance? Unique name. Love it! Super artistic rich kid with a twin and the most powerful and rich arrogant snob job? Recipe #23 for a good story!
rae chapter 26 . 7/18/2013
Loved the story :')
Wicked4life chapter 17 . 7/17/2013
U have a psych major dont u?
PenPegs chapter 19 . 7/6/2013
LOVE. IT.
Guest chapter 7 . 5/30/2013
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etc chapter 19 . 5/2/2013
The "What happens when he buys her for a week" is not clear.
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