Reviews for When You Own the Universe |
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![]() ![]() YAYY! They finally got together! I was grinning like crazy during the whole convo between Remmy and Elliot.. xD |
![]() ![]() I'm sorry but the last bit with Remmington glaring at Jonah and Jonah running and Remmington chasing after him.. It jus made me laugh so hard.. I don't know why.. Maybw 'cause I'm weird? Or..yeah.. I have no other explanation for that.. |
![]() ![]() Gahhh! Major cliffie! You evil, evil person.. I won't be able to read the rest until tonight! Stupid school.. How will I be able to survive? |
![]() ![]() I swear I almost cried whilst reading this and the previous chapter.. |
![]() ![]() Gahh! Who is Remington's SA? And how the heck does she manage to leave him those letters undetected? Is she some sort of ninja? o.O ...hmmm... |
![]() ![]() He just..just..he..bu..he... :O I swear, when I read the last bit my mouth was hanging open for at least 5 minutes.. Then I re-read it again to make sure my mind wasn't playing tricks with me, that's it's all actually in my head, but then I discover that it's not.. And now my facial expression is back to this :O I'm just lucky there are no flies around.. |
![]() ![]() Well yeah, I guess the bet thing is a bit overused but it can't be helped. Besides, it's how the bet is used is what makes each story different. Anyways, I am loving this so far :) Oh and the background info on Jonah was pretty good.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow..this..is gonna be a very interesting story :) |
![]() ![]() I screamed towards the end at 2.30 in the morning.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loving your story! But lemme just say what...the..fck? *excuse my lang* But wow, didn't see that coming at all. What a cliffy! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i was literally crying while reading...aah anger, hatred, love,trust all emotions were written in such a manner i was on a emotional roller coaster.. loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, first of all I wanna say hi to you.. And of course I also wanna say that you're such an AWESOME writer... The story was really awesome... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found the protagonist's name a bit weird at first but as the story goes, I actually liked it. :)) Your story though is something I liked since the beginning. :D It's absolutely wonderful! :)) Although I don't think guys can be that emotional. But Jonah is loveable as he is. :) I also hoped that Chris had more "screen time" (I couldn't find the right word. Hahaha) because he really intrigued me the moment I read he sang Time After Time. :)) But all in all, I love this story! A few errors here and there but it's a great read. :) I couldn't stop reading till the end. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I detest Rememberence's decisions. |
![]() ![]() I love this soooo much! Jonah is so sweet and I love it when they bicker, I just love their relationship. They're so cute! Haha. )) |