Reviews for Untitled
Rhetorics chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
Wow... you're doing the whole shakespear thing with the o'er. Nicee hahah.
and wow.. can branches really brush your cheek...? wouldn't they scratch it/ Ow, that sounds like it hurts... but the tone of the rest of the poem just makes it sound so... melifluous. yes... branches gently brushing against ur skin... it sounds so good hahah.
and wow... is this untitled relaly? u should name ite "seasons" lol. that'd be a good title. Wow... it's been untitled for a while now huh *checks the published date*? good imagery as always. Keep up the good work.
Ephemeral Dreams chapter 1 . 10/31/2003
I could drown in music...and you expressed that feeling exactly. Kudos to you for your incredible talent. Lol, ElveNDestiNy is humbled. *bows*
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Beautiful poem.. very beautiful. It had a sort of calming effect on me. Great work, keep writing.
john chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
do you even play the piano well enough to do that? XD
Tree chapter 1 . 10/16/2003
Like I said... beautiful!