What. The. Fuck? Where is she? Where is she? What dies she look like? What was she doing at the start? Why have you not bothered to explain ANYTHING?

lol- i like this "chapter"...your funny when mad...

actually, i understood this story quite well. your writing reminds me VERY MUCH of tanith lee's books.

I mean a LOT. and i love tanith lee. it's hard to write in that kind of style...so you get cookies!

That was the funniest bullshit chapter I've ever read! Muahaha! You have no qualms over speaking your mind. Let those people know how you feel, damnit! :-D

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Sprechen Sie Deutsch? Hmm... As soon as Goderich started talking about sweets and candy, I knew he was a perverted rapist that preyed on younger women! Well, we don't know that, but I think thats what he is. Hansel and Gretel seem a little suspicious, too. A lot of these characters jump right out of a story book! I love it! :-D Have you ever read "Politically Correct Bedtime stories/Once Upon a More Enlightened Time"? I believe it is out of print (fortunetly I have a copy), but if you can get your hands on one at a used book store, online, or at the library, I suggest you do so. I will have to find it and look up the author. My bookshelves contain many books after all, and it may be a while until I find that book. However, if you do come across it, the book is a great read, full of short stories of faerie-tales. They put a new 'spin' on them. Message me for details about the book.

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Maybe it's just me, but this chapter made it seem like Jacques isn't AS bad as he seems, though there is little improvement. This story is going great!

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Months? MONTHS? I don't think I can wait that long to see them together!

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Wait! Does this mean Ankou broke the "spell" when he cut into Locke, and then drank her blood and killed her?

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That whole deer thing was so confusing! Gahh! I don't understand it at all!

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umm... I am utterly confused. I have no idea wats going on... Someone enlighten me plz

I was more than willing to let you take your time. Discontinuing is understandable, really, especially if you feel hounded.

The art of Glamour seems perfect for Dominique. Thank you very much for shedding some more light on her stag condition - I was looking forward to hearing more about it. The only thing I want to bring up is Georges' discussion with Dominique about remembering her life. It allows me to understand clearly what Georges is trying to teach, and it's an excellent thought to consider, but the member bit seems out of place. Not the idea, but the word itself, although I can see no other word to replace it with. Can't wait to see Dominique fly again! And become a stag. So cool.

I have to say that you lost me a little in the beginning there. It wasn't confusing, but it seemed like a string of very numb explanations. Although, considering Ankou's state at this moment, it is understandable. And then...what an unexpected turn you have taken.

"Stay awake brother...stay awake..."

I read that thinking, "Why yes, yes, he wants to save him, he's dying to save him...suspense..." and then!

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A very, very clever device.

O just 'nother question sry but didnt you have a vampire story?

Im sorry to hear that, but there are other and better fish out there~ so im sure you'll find the one if that what your looking for! :D

...Does this book is closed mean that there will be no more updates in this story?...

When I started reading this story I hadn't realized you hadn't updated in almost half a year but i'm glad I didn't (I wouldn't have kept readng). Just please update soon. I'm sorry that I have no critiques for your story but I do love it. Take Care! Keep Writing! (: