Reviews for Blood, Sweat and Tears
XDon'tEatTheCeleryX chapter 1 . 2/22/2013
Wow. I have never really thought about this before. A unique and interesting poem; well done!
xXTheRealSlimBabbii7Xx chapter 1 . 9/16/2010
that was good :) i liked how you tied the title into the actual poem. it was a bit short i admit, but it was sweet all the same and very enjoyable!
Guenevere Lee chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Holy shit that was good... Good use of repetition, words, emotions, ect, ect, it was really good!
I wonder if our Gods ever think that about us...
But yeah, absolutely amazing.
-LS
IHJ chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
A nice motif with "I created you; I molded you". It ended somewhat abruptly to me, but I suppose that was to complement the title of "Blood, Sweat and Tears", eh? But...I still feel it could MORE, like there could be more you could tell to the characters you created, more of the struggle and strife you had to go through to make them believeable and loved (or hated). Hm, I reckon it's just me.

A good poem, unique in its idea.

-Izzy J.