This is good. It has a few weird situations, but it seems your average love triangle story. I also saw some tense change, but that can be fixed. I liked it, and I'm sorry it took so long to review. But if you can read my story again, I would like that.

I like this story as I said before, but you really got to stop ending chapters in cliffhangers! Now I woun't be able to sleep. Anyway, great story!

One question: who's older, Elexia or Saden?

I LOVE THESE STORY! Please write more! It's fantastic!(and not in the least confussing)

_ no offence but i am now officailly confused. Anyways, so far its good, i liked, so keep it up, i can't wait for an update.
Ciao~
~Never the same~

oohh, more i say!

RomancE! This is getting exciting!

cool~ seems good so far! Gotta read more~

Great. Positively wonderful.

::big, glazed eyes:: Aww...rad. I love this story so far. BlakeWonderful.

NO! Don't cut off there! WONDERFUL!

How sad...I'm starting to develop a soft spot for Blake...ep!

This is so...ethereal. I really love your style of writing. I am looking forward to more!

Beautiful. Just like the previous chapters.

Oh...I really like this Blake guy. He seems so...sweet. I like it. You know, this story is so beautiful. I really really love it. Please, for the life of me, WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!

NO! she cannot leave! NO! ::laughs:: I LOVE this story! ::eyes are glossy::