Reviews for Murderer
decayinglife chapter 1 . 7/30/2004
I really adored this one, I like it a lot. I really like this line, "Imagine love but understand hate." very good, i loved it.
iris044 chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
Very nice. I liked it much.
Shadow of the Light chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Wow, this is such a great poem, though you've probably heard that about it many times before...This is really thought provoking and yet at the same time laid out plainly for all to see. Great job, keep up the writing!
Eternity's Secret chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
Wow... this is GREAT!
silentteardrops chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Hmm. That was really good. I'm not gonna lie and say I know anything about poetry but I still like it. You're a good writer.
The Black Rider chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Another excellent piece. Very intense and yet hauntingly beautiful as well. Those last two lines really punched me in the face there. Nice work.
Only The Blade Of Fire chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Your wording, rhyming and rhythm are great. And the first line is really capturing and I have a grasp of the point you're making. This is a good and interesting poem.