Reviews for Lies? im not sure about that
whatsapenname chapter 1 . 2/3/2004
i like it a lot. the if only if only part is good but id change in this i could believe to like "id left you sooner" or something. if you do, you should make another stanza to sort of wrap it up. like
"but i didnt, i didnt
and now youre still here"
whatever. thnx for reviewing for my poems and about dog tag, he was homeless BECAUSE he drank thats how his family left him too.
Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Yay. Its another one in the structure i really like :D And i really like the way u repeated the word! Good poem :D
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
trying to convince your self is the hardest part and i think this poem is great no need to add more!
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
I think then ending's really good and you should leave it as it is. IT's kinda hard to read and it doesn't flow very well when you put 2 words together like that, maybe consider changing that. Really good message.
PainKiller chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
The repetition worked so incredibly well throughout this to emphasize your point. The "Hate, Hate" and the "Love, Love" stanzas were my favs.
Ian chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
I like the format. I also like the poem, great job once again