Reviews for Rain
Matthew James Current chapter 1 . 4/23/2004
A sad poem filled with meaning. I like it, and how it sounds like a song. Good job here. Critique wise, no flaws, I would recommend adding imagery just as a step to take your work from very good to great. But you add whatever you want, or nothing at all. It's your poem after all _. In any case, feel free to stop by and let me know what you think of my work. Keep writing.
a-Leng chapter 1 . 2/29/2004
That was a lovely poem and you made it rhyme nicely too, except that cp,es amd numb don't rhyme and neither does back and luck. I suppose it doesn't really ruin the poem in anyway though so it's s'all good.
Regan chapter 1 . 2/22/2004
This must be one of the most beauteous poems I've ever read! It's wonderful, Chen.
However, I just want to point out that there are just some tiny places that don't really rhyme, like "comes" and "numb", "back" and "luck". Overall it's splendid.
Keep up the good work, Chen!
Crystal Snowflakes chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Hey Chen,

I must say, this is probably one of the best poem you've come up so far. Great. Anyhow, see you later.

Lu x 2 chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
good good good la~
WenWen chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
wow... meaningful~ lol, yeah, i kinda of get it, it's a good poem~ yeah..sighh... okay... i g2g now, go eat something, so hungry from skating.. yea.. so.. NICE POEM!~ but i don't understand y would u stand in the rain... u will get a COLD!~ alright.. baibai
ScarletWishingstar chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
i luv the rain...if it could wash away troubles i'd be so much happier...
Derek chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Wow... so nice... and sad... too...

Write more!
Jenny chapter 1 . 10/17/2003
Indead, it's nice and beautiful yet sad..