hey pritty go keep up you work and you'll be even beterhey if you would rivew mine k bey

I liked it a lot. It was so descriptive, in a good way. Great work.

Nice little poem, also nice to see some positive notes. :) I feel like this sometimes, but then again I know anything can crush my happiness *sigh* I'm not the most positive person lol well not all the time. Anyways, Cute little piece. Lots of writings you have here!

*Jenna*

Very beautiful piece.

~Heart of the Sword