Reviews for The visitor
Spooni chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
A very nice peice. You have some great areas of description, lie the fire and especially aroun David's eyes. And it's such a wonderful idea; everyone loses someone they love at some point in thier life, and it would be so great to get a chance to talk to them. And hey, siblings that get along! Another miracle! :-)
Seriously though, very nice. I enjoy your writing style.
I also enjoyed the fact that they were Scottish. _ Are you?
Earthsong12 chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
This story is amazing. The ending was terrific! One typo: In paragraph 5, it should be "my prince charming". But that's the only mistake. This is super!
Freddie Nickles chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
OH my god!

I couldnt find anything to critique about. You surely have control over the dialogs. Its so much beautiful.

I want to read whats going to be next

I love it

:)

Freddie