Reviews for Crossing the Line
Angels Soul1 chapter 1 . 11/27/2003
A great story. you got talent! keep up da gud work! you can make this story really gud. keep writtin more chapters!

mini

ps. please review my poem or story. thanxs !
Plutonian Angel chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
I luved this story, especially because of that particular part that you were tentative about leaving in there:-)
hamsta-boi chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
HEY I LIKE THIS STORY. Its very cool. You write well. You always seem to get certain "popular foke" with lots of HA reviews and its the good people that usually get left out. Congratualtions cool fic. will there be more?