yuanyuan chapter 1 . 6/3/2010
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Marie Berden chapter 1 . 4/11/2010
This was really good. I liked Ron's bit. Ellen... I don't know, but anyway, this kind of made me think about things. That's always a good thing, I suppose.
olgite the squidgal chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
This reminds me of O. Henry's short stories. The twist in the end is all the more heartbreaking after the build up of emotional tension. This fine story had me thinking "If only..."
1234567890 chapter 1 . 10/24/2005
it is such a nice story. are u going to continue? plz review my stories whenever possible. thnx)
cathrine face chapter 1 . 6/6/2005
20, wow it seemed so close when the Y2K bug was eating at everyone. I truely enjoyed this piece of writting however short, i love started with drama.
Lil1 chapter 1 . 10/20/2002
*grabs box of tissues and sniffs* So nice, saddest one yet-really like a Twilight Zone thiingy (yes the black and white crap I still watch it) *sister shouts and tells me to get a life* Just one more story and I'll review for my test-PROMISE! Hehe...*in the tune of can't get enough of this sugar crisp* Can't get enough of Jonathan!
amdespot chapter 1 . 6/7/2002
That is so sad. It goes to show that life IS full of choices but its not just nothing. Life is everything.
Ekil Laer chapter 1 . 2/12/2002
The story is okay, but was unable to evoke my feelings for this man. Try harder!
Denise Willis chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
How sad is this? If onlys really get me..Deexxx
Jai chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Sad story, but good!
netshark chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Very ironic. Like all your works, well-crafted.
Halo chapter 1 . 4/11/2000
Although not what I had expected from the title, it is very well written. This one sort of hit home with me, but I won't go into that. The descriptions are good, but I thought that you could have developed the storyline more.. Like put in more details about Ron and Ellen's relationship. That was sort of sketchy.