Reviews for The One
Gethsemane of the Stream chapter 1 . 4/3/2004
That was realy sweet.
It flows realy nicely!
Keep up the good stuff!
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If one can sell there soul to the devil,
And say a random arrow were to...drive threw his heart.
Do I still get paid?
-Gethsemane of the Stream-
NightTimeDreamer chapter 1 . 1/17/2004
This is really sweet. I like all the similes and metaphors. Awesome job!
KawaiiCookie chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
Really sweet. ) Caught the feeling well. Good work!
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 10/21/2003
wow! this is awesome! I really love the rhyme! this is really cute! awesome! keep up the great work!

K.F.
Kittle chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
Good poem... I liked it...