Reviews for River's Aflame
unrequitedx chapter 1 . 10/22/2005
Wow, your poetries are so full of meaning and power as you said for mine. You are gifted of writing poetries aren't you? Plus, you wrote more than 200 poetries on FictionPress, that's speechlessly amazing. You're definetely in my favortie authors list, I love your poetry! You're like the next Charles Baudelaire~~
Seth Greenwood chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
First, the poem. Too true. However war can easily be justified sometimes (like in Iraq, freeing the Iraqis from Saddam). Second, thanks for the review. I train myself in swordsmanship and I'm a boy scout, so there's the answers to your questions.

All to Jesus, Seth Greenwood
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
Wonderful piece.D.
Genius-Ben chapter 1 . 11/9/2004
I noticed that in all of your poems that I read you had at least one typo. "aloud to rote in such a fashion" would be an example of one in this poem. You may wish to fix some of those. Good poem though!
~The Benster!
Joflower chapter 1 . 10/18/2003
War sucks. It should be illegal to fight over senseless things. Good poem by the way...